Ponyshock: fishy beginnings

by ishmar

chapter 1:fishy beginnings

Fishy Beginnings

....call me isaac...... isaac marshin....

>power on

_command accepted_

>run email

_command accepted_

starting program please wait. . .

welcome to haymail isaac132 !

you have (1) unread message would you like to view? Y/N

>Y

subject: important

from:juva

HEYYY! its me, your buddy juva just here to say call me its important business...I'd recommend call me before that big party tonight in at 8:00 ...ya know? the one with the princesses thanks...

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isaac,"this better not be another "OH ITS JUST TO GET SUM MILK AT DA GIANT PONY MARKET" if it is then that's the last time ill call him"

isaac walked to the living room of his apartment his appartment was nothing fancy it had a tv,bathroom,kitchenette, and a bedroom the apartment was rather old and would be a place that you wouldn't be surprised if it was to have a cockroach infestation...but it didn't bother isaac as long as he was able to live in it...

isaac was a humble and kind colt with a sand coloured body and dark brown mane, his family was known for not having wild colours such as pink,cyan, and neon

he went to watch some tv before running his daily errands and go to the phone booth what was on was the food channel witch was odd since isaac bought the 20 channel bundle pack his annual membership hasn't even expired

he decided to start his day...the sooner he got started the sooner he would get done after all there was nothing more precious to him then sleep....

[ Authors note sorry this chapter is short its my first fic and im eager to kick it of...anyhow expect this to be an action packed flip flop UNCHARTED 3 AWESOMEDINOSHARK WIT LAZER ON BACKSEXXYPEICEOFSUPAHASASINSTUFF.....anyway leave suggestions and critique in the comments...and with that bye]

Comments

Too short, interesting idea, First letter of new paragraphs need to be capitilized, names need to be capitilized also
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Too lazy to post as myself, so I'm bein' a guest

[ishmar]

39481 Thanks, im working on the next chapter witch will be less lazy and longer......emoticon spam