A trans mare with a crappy job takes in a homeless griffon. Together they try to live their lives and try to make it in the "big city" of Ponyville. A story of love, courage and fancy hair dyes.
the POV is really messing with me here it's a bit clearer after I read it a 2nd time, but I was confused the whole time on the first go I do like it though, hope to see more soon
I like where this story could go. I'll admit, the constant POV changes threw me off a time or two, but it didn't detract too much.
A nice start.
the POV is really messing with me here
it's a bit clearer after I read it a 2nd time, but I was confused the whole time on the first go
I do like it though, hope to see more soon
I advise adding the name of which character is telling the story for each scene. It'll just make it easier to keep track of things in the future.