Awesome work, keep it up

You're sure this is your first work? Surely you mean your first work on this site, right? This looks a lot better refined than most first pieces I've seen.

I like the idea behind this. In fact I'm liking it more than I am my own Nightmare Night story.

6999530 No, I really mean this is my first piece of MLP fiction period. This isn't my first writing period although I'll admit it's actually been years since I wrote an actual at length story. Thank you very much though.

This is very well written and quite entertaining. I look forward to whatever you have next.

I KNOW WHICH PICTURES YOU ARE REFERRING TO...
I AM OFF, TO SEE THE PICTURES.

Well this is getting interesting