Need to work on keeping a constant tense. You flick between past tense and present tense, almost like you don't notice it. Anyways, another power she could have would be the ability to walk during the day without burning. A vampire with this ability is called a Daywalker. Yet another power she could have is the ability to make a familiar, by biting an animal (or anything with a brain really) and binding them to her with magic.

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Yeah I made that chapter a long time ago, as well as worked on it enough that it all kinda mixed together an I might have missed a lot of things, my bad I'll figure how it fix it later.

The next chapter is fresh and new, it still has that new chapter smell to it that I'm sure be better then most of the others.

I do have her with the ability to control minds an turn those who gaze into her eyes to become thralls of sorts.

I dont remember where I got the idea from, I think its like vamprieric seduction mixed with fallout animal friend perk.