It was my next room neighbor, Josh, he was tall short brown hair with green eyes wearing a colts hoodie and blue jeans.

This should be two sentences and it needs one additional comma.

I started to work again before my stomach grumbled and I ignored my empty stomach and tried to focus on my work. 

Again with the run-on sentences.

After several more seconds there was a louder groan from my stomach and I sighed in defeat and saved my work and turned off my computer.

And a third.

I walked for a while heading for the closest place I could find to grab a bite to eat. Luckily the closest place to grab a bite to eat was Taco Bell. 

You use the phrase 'grab a bite to eat' in two consecutive sentences. Invite some variety into your sentence structure.

(For real. It’s to die for.)

THAT has no place in a story. I'm done. Downvoted.