great chapter, the ante is really up now, Caramel is being framed, the ponies that he had lived with in peace for so many years have turned rabid on him and he has no one to turn to. I feel that the Guard doing a town meting about the pedophile ring and and using the filly to denounce the pedophile in their meets was completely unprofessional of them, for what I can only see a a means to get some good PR for them with barehanded the most socially veil of offenders in cuffs by doing this in a orchestrate public setting that could easily be turned into an out of control mob that they can't handle.

I like the reveal of Fluttershy having been a former pedophile, I wander if she prose all the pimped-up need for affection is put into caring for he animals; he it would also be a good character to show that female pedophile do also exist and to show theirs side of things. I feel that the presences of the Ursa at the middle of town for no apparent reasons was unfortunately feel really contrived for the with the only the point of allowing Caramel to escape.

It is interesting to see the Charamel's former Psychiatries "seems" to changed so much on her position about how to treat pedophiles, I wander what has made her changed so much, to be really concern about Caramel predicament. I wander what is the treatment that she has in mind for him. I still wander what was Sasaflash acceptance of Caramel's not actually in love with her, and that she is now persecuted by association with the pedophile Caramel.

Still, I am surprised that their are so many pedophile their are in such a confine area, I know it is for the plot convents but I am surprised that they have managed to for a ring foal trade

Even doe I find the reactions of the characters a little clunky at time, out of character for others, like Twilight Sparkle for doing nothing to stop the mob from going out hand, despite being a princess how hast to up hold the law at all times, it is still a fascinating read. I am curious to know how did you do your research for this subject?

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I like the reveal of Fluttershy having been a former pedophile, I wander if she prose all the pimped-up need for affection is put into caring for he animals; he it would also be a good character to show that female pedophile do also exist and to show theirs side of things. I feel that the presences of the Ursa at the middle of town for no apparent reasons was unfortunately feel really contrived for the with the only the point of allowing Caramel to escape.

Actually, it was not contrived, this was part of Fluttershy's plan

It is interesting to see the Charamel's former Psychiatries "seems" to changed so much on her position about how to treat pedophiles, I wander what has made her changed so much, to be really concern about Caramel predicament. I wander what is the treatment that she has in mind for him. I still wander what was Sasaflash acceptance of Caramel's not actually in love with her, and that she is now persecuted by association with the pedophile Caramel.

That answer will be revealed in the next chapter; as for Sassaflash, she clearly wants to distance herself from him.

Still, I am surprised that their are so many pedophile their are in such a confine area, I know it is for the plot convents but I am surprised that they have managed to for a ring foal trade

There is one in Canterlot, but such a thing does not exist in Ponyville. It was all a lie, yet no one seems to care or notice that it is a lie.

Even doe I find the reactions of the characters a little clunky at time, out of character for others, like Twilight Sparkle for doing nothing to stop the mob from going out hand, despite being a princess how hast to up hold the law at all times, it is still a fascinating read. I am curious to know how did you do your research for this subject?

Twilight is actually not yet a princess, this takes place before the season 4 finale actually, so she's still just town librarian and egghead Twilight Sparkle. But Twilight knows that it is pointless to stop a mindless and rabidly angry mob. As for research...don't expect me to reveal all of my secrets.

Also, for the next chapter, I suggest you do not mention any plot points. I want all comments for the final chapter to be SPOILER FREE.

7112808 Plot point? I am not sure about what you mean about it in my comments. I don't need specifics, I just want to make sure I understand your meaning, for future reference.

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I don't want people to infer the ending through the comments.

Shit's going down further south here.

I kind of feel like maybe Fluttershy loved a foalophile when she was younger, and that's why she wants to help him. It maybe, Celestia had, at some point been a foalophile. My mind is racing with possibilities for the future