A very interesting start and very well written. It does a good job at drawing the reader in and making us want to read more. This story has a lot of potential, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Good job.

Too soon to tell but looks interesting. Will track.

Reads chapter ..
did he get turned into a pony ?
Rereads chapter ...
"Damien knew he was changing. He could feel it both in his body and his soul. It terrified him, being changed..."
Yep, got turned into pony ...damnit ....
The question is What type of pony is he now ?