Just when I was starting to think the story was dead.

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yeah ill be updating my other story as well, and may be do a blog to explain why iv had no updates in a while.

It's great to see an other chapter of this story again. this is really the sort of story that I like about his sort of fetich's. Can't wait to see what will happen next.

“Don’t you think this is a little cruel aunty maybe we can just end it hear. It should be here

Twilight awoke to the feeling of being rock and a warm body holding her. It should be rocked

Perhaps this would work better.
Twilight awoke to the feeling of being held against a warm body as she was rocked.

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Agreed and thank you for pointing those errors out.^.^

7231029 No problem. I found another one you might want to look at.

What no you stupid book change me! Ewww gross no I don’t want to bounces in this mess!”

What?! No you stupid book, change me! Ewww gross, I don’t want to be bounced in this mess!”

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Fixed thank you ^.^

7231191 You forgot to cap the N in no.

If you don't mind, how about you go to my story "Secret Lives of Background ponies" I have been writing for the last few months and leave a massage. So far no one has left a message and I'm starting to get weirded out, I mean, why doesn't anyone leave a comment? Ether good or bad, it would be nice to have some feedback. You don't haft to read my story, you can just be the first to comment, it might just get others to start commenting.

There could be a good story in the, buy you've certainly managed to hide it under a lot of out-of-character dialogue and actions, along with plenty of typos.

typos oh my lots of them, but quite an interesting take