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Wow, this story is taking ages to pick up...
Hopefully Cantor will pull his act together in time for the expedition...
I hope I still have some readers at this point... Trust me, it will get better... I hope...
guns are dangerous and deadly just as other tools are Cantor you should know that cant wait for the next chapter btw I am a gun owner also are you?
897585 I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! Later chapters will be much better...
I live in England, so pretty much the only people who can own guns are farmers. It's very hard to get a gun licence in the U.K I think...
899237 lol I dont need a license wait I thought UK took gun rights away and why do farmers get to own em?
899275 I think because they would use them as a tool, rather than self-defence, which is what could be used as an excuse for murder, as in:
"I shot him in the name of self defence" - And it could be difficult to prove whoever did it wrong unless they use a lie detector.
I don't know! But I think it's harder to get a gun in England than in America...
901422 true that it is
Cantor isn't just a god, he's more like a Titan...
902871 That's exactly it.
Though he is more powerful than Celestia and Luna combined, he is far from perfect; absolute power and perfection are very different...
Thank you for reading on and not disliking and leaving because of the - what was it?... "Mary-sue" nature of Cantor... or something?...
I dunno! Thanks for reading!
928501 Your comment made me lol!
Thank you for your comments. In fact, I'm surprised you found the first three chapters bearable - especially since it's pretty much ALL about Cantor...
>Then again, I suppose Cantor is the main character...
>Then again 2, The first few chapters are merely setting up the premise for later on...
ANYWAY! I'm overjoyed that you like this story so far - especially since it gets... unusual qualities for a it's type of story...
And there's no need to search for a long distance punching spell! But hopefully I can pick up some more likes in later chapters!
Okay, so far it's excellent. There's a lot fewer typos and the like, there's a few, but nothing worth mentioning really.
There's a few inconsistencies, like how can they have lasers when they don't really understand how light works? I thought that to build lasers you'd need to have an intrinsic understanding of the light-spectrum and how everything like that works. I'm no expert though, so eh, I dunno.
Then again, it's Equestria, where technology and physics are so inconsistent that it would make Einstein blush.
I'm really loving the longer chapters, as well as Cantor's 'Nightmare' showing itself in a way. Ugh... Cantor going all Nightmare Moon would literally spell doom for the planet. Poor aliens...
And then you're once again ripping his wings off later on? Poor guy, will he ever catch a break.
And I'm betting that he'll turn out to be somehow immortal, or close to it, like Celly or Luna. Maybe like his rapid cell-regeneration or something renders him virtually immortal. I'd think so at least, due to his rapid recoveries, that this would render stuff like death by old age nearly impossible. Oh, and he'd totally rip apart space-time if he ever gets a hold of that time-travel spell Twilight used in that episode.
EDIT: Inconsistent and confusing comments much?
>.< I hate when i can barely read this story because i KNOW something bad will happen. I like when there are joyful parts, not an entire 12k chapter full of foreboding. anyways, back to reading the rest of the chappie:3
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>Lol, I don't want to give too much away, but lets just say in the next chapter, things are a little nicer...
That's a very good point I never really thought of! I don't know, maybe the lasers work with magic or someting... I don't know!
if they want to kill him why not try ARROW TO THE KNEE
Thank god for Texas haha everyone has a gun its even legal to carry an unliscened one in your car. GOD BLESS REDNECKS
1045500 To all of your comments: What the fuck!? Lol, you're mental!
Thanks for the feedback... I think...
1047028 It's all good except for cotton pickers a.k.a Blackpeople
How is this story mature for sex that makes no sense I mean da fuq is this seriously Damnit Twilight not the time for your cravings
1055257 I put it there just in case; my mind tends to wander, but as far as I have planned, there will be no clop scene :/
1055359 Awww thats just not right... just kidding now then my mind is back to its insane form HOo-FUCKING-RAW
dude you masturbated in the back of my car did you use lotion though. no I just dry rubbed. No dude you have to use lotion or you will chafe man. oh dude I didn't know. It's okay man just next time use lotion.