For the longest time, Equestria was the most peaceful place imaginable. But one day, something changes. Absolute evil is brought to Equestria, and Pinkamena is at the center of it all. She will suffer unimaginable pain, beyond comprehension.
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Does this story take place in the Sombra timeline that appeared in The Cutie Re-mark?
He did kinda wipe two Alicorns that one time...
Not that anyone wants to remember that. Or knows that for that matter.
I don't mean to be a critic. I have Grammarly on my browser and it's urging me to correct the mistakes. It's fine though. Everyone makes mistakes. I know I do.
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Oh don't get me wrong, I do appreciate it, but it is mostly unnecessary. This is one of the first stories I ever wrote, and as a writer, as was very very different and only slightly better than an amateur. Now I've had years of experience at writing and I'd like to think I've gotten significantly better, and I do now have an editor. Thank you for the effort though.
Right now, I am only currently writing two series. One of them I just recently started, and the other one is my long term series. In my long term the writing gets better and better with each chapter as I try to improve, and with me recent one it seems to be well received, so I'm hoping it is above average in terms of writing.