good story, like the other one of BombShelter's stories I have reviewed thus far, it is not one I would usually read. The shipping kinda works, but I hope that it will be expanded on later on. The whole Discord thing is cool, makes sense, and is awesome (because Discord) and I think the way that this story is presented works along with almost no grammatical errors. However, the shipping as of "The Truth" seems unnecessary and feels like the story is trying to fit in as many different genres as possible to attract a larger audience which... doesn't really fit in with the previous story-line too well and will hopefully work more with the story in the future. Due to it being unfinished, I will wait before saying anything more to see whether the shipping works or not in the next few chapters.
Discord! Beta, get out the black hole cannon.
Intense as fuuck bruh
MOOOOAAAAAARRR!
6755344 ok, but I am also using champagne still. It is kind of tradition.
Bombshelter is popping up all over my feed...
Not complaining, the stories are good.
time for round 2.
Review time!
good story, like the other one of BombShelter's stories I have reviewed thus far, it is not one I would usually read. The shipping kinda works, but I hope that it will be expanded on later on. The whole Discord thing is cool, makes sense, and is awesome (because Discord) and I think the way that this story is presented works along with almost no grammatical errors. However, the shipping as of "The Truth" seems unnecessary and feels like the story is trying to fit in as many different genres as possible to attract a larger audience which... doesn't really fit in with the previous story-line too well and will hopefully work more with the story in the future. Due to it being unfinished, I will wait before saying anything more to see whether the shipping works or not in the next few chapters.
6757436 Nice review! The next few chapters will be more action than SoL, after that will be more SoL and character developement.