I don't normally read M/M but this was very good for a first time. (No pun intended)

Moar.

I enjoyed it, even if the actual scene was rather brief.

I would recommend having someone proofread your work, though. There were a number of grammatical errors...

Yeah it was alright. I'd definitely read more if you make more.

Fuck it, I'm bi. LET'S READ, MUTHA FUCKAS!

A little rushed, but good.

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“Ooh I know how about Barry?”
This suddenly comes to my mind.

I'm glad you guys liked it. If you have requests of your own please post them in the topic in the M/M shipping group as those will be given priority over any I see in the comments.

Also if you're interested in being a pre-reader, please send me a message and I'll send you the next story once it's finished.

Mares are for love. Stallions are for sex.

Oh dear Celestia what in Equestria did I just write...

But yes, to echo those above, you could use dozens and dozens of commas. So many.

well i guess im bi after all :3

Me? Bisexual? No way, I just read this for the...uhm...compelling storyline! Yeah, that's it, totally not for any sexual reasons!

2233382 hey we should talk