• Member Since 18th Nov, 2011
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That_One_Brony


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I don't normally read M/M but this was very good for a first time. (No pun intended)

I enjoyed it, even if the actual scene was rather brief.

I would recommend having someone proofread your work, though. There were a number of grammatical errors...

Yeah it was alright. I'd definitely read more if you make more.

Fuck it, I'm bi. LET'S READ, MUTHA FUCKAS!

“Ooh I know how about Barry?”
This suddenly comes to my mind.

I'm glad you guys liked it. If you have requests of your own please post them in the topic in the M/M shipping group as those will be given priority over any I see in the comments.

Also if you're interested in being a pre-reader, please send me a message and I'll send you the next story once it's finished.

Mares are for love. Stallions are for sex. :moustache:

Oh dear Celestia what in Equestria did I just write...

But yes, to echo those above, you could use dozens and dozens of commas. So many.

well i guess im bi after all :3

that was pretty cool. your a good writer. :coolphoto:

The Principality of Zeon approves of this clop.

MaleTwilight Sparkle/Shining Armor/maleCadance

How about blueblood/big mac?

This. Is. Awesome! :raritystarry: The dynamic between AJ and Rainbow is great, and the clop was pretty inventive.
Great job, and thanks for taking my request. It turned out so well that I'm tempted to make another.

ButterscotchSeme!/Gilbert GriffinUke!

Rainbow Blitz/Gilbert Griffin

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Please submit your requests here http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=51&thread=1733 I mention this so you know I'm not just putting off your requests. There's quite a line I have to work through.

Is 'Gilbert' really the best cross-&-arrow/r63 name for Gilda's counterpart?

Anyway man, you really have an appropriate name; you are That_One_Brony who actually wrote not one but several great M/M clopfics. Thus I crown you the awesomest Clopfic writer I have ever had the pleasure of enjoying the work of.

Keep up the exceptional work and keep ignoring the negative thumbs.

For Great Justice!

974571 Thank you very much for the praise Scorpion. Truth be told I just chose this name because I like how nondescript it is.

Might I suggest you make a request in the topic. There is quite a backlog, but if it's intriguing I will probably get to it sooner.

Oh and if you have any better suggestions for a name for Gilda, please say so. That request is fast approaching.

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How about just 'Gill' or you could try the personality swap idea: Gilda is a tomboy so her counterpart is effeminate, thus he is named (or at least called) 'Jill' or 'Jillian'

That's just off the tip of my head, pretty good huh?

For Great Justice!

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Okay, Gideon is far better then Gilbert. But I still like the Jillian idea.

For Great Justice!

Any way I can get a link to this shipping group of yours?

figured out who was what character was confusing at first , but after going back i figured it out , some more explanation on what's going on would be nice....

I'm lost. Which is the game world, which is real, did Luna change genders in reality, etc. Fill me in, please!

1873500 My apologies for the confusing narrative on that one. Essentially, this is taking place ass the game slowly overtakes Luna's reality. Everything that happened happened in both the game and for real.

Me? Bisexual? No way, I just read this for the...uhm...compelling storyline! Yeah, that's it, totally not for any sexual reasons! :twilightblush:

You know what I've never seen before? Either a human female X male pony, or a male human X male pony.

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