Yay, actually reading as you updated, was saddened by the fact there was no more. An easy fav in my book of Celestia and Twilights early days of being together, hope to read more.

Very,very sexy.

Fuck Her Gently - Tenacious D

Niiiice.
Cute story. Seemed to me like some more details and what the characters (Twi mainly) were feeling on a physical level. Emotionally, it was great, but physical seemed lacking. Just somthing I noticed, but I do not consider my self an expert by any stretch.

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Saw those guys live not too long ago in September. Great concert. And yes, they did play that song. Listening to this song reading pony love. What the hell am I doing... I don't care, I like it.

I love how Celestia didn't forget about Twilight's wings needing some care. The dialogue was nice, it seemed to match how they felt and my favorite part has to be the cuddling. Sun almighty is it cute to read.

You’ve skillfully shown us the blessing/curse that is Twilight’s mind, which refuses to disengage from hyperdrive even in the most physical and emotional of contexts.

I also enjoyed generous and loving Celestia, who knows Twilight better than the purple alicorn knows herself. However, since she knows Twilight so well, why not address her former student’s fears upfront? Leaping from tickles and closed mouth kisses to full-blown sex with her neurotic magical prodigy veers uncomfortably into Molestia territory.

Nodding consent then running away to the bathroom is far from the enthusiastic consent Twilight might have offered had they talked about the crippling anxiety causing Twilight to dread intimacy. I was too upset with Celestia for abdicating her responsibility to Twilight to fully appreciate this otherwise tender coupling. And yes, as a deity several millennia older than her virginal beloved, Celestia bears the responsibility of Minding the Gap.

tl;dr Celestia broke the first two rules of the Kamare Sutra.

Commence read.

The in depth following of the self-conscious.

Get that...

Great chapter!