An AU setting first-person story featuring Applejack. Applejack becomes embroiled in a conflict between ponies and buffalo.
Well that's certainly an interesting start.Different, but interesting.Following, let's see how you'll handle the other chapters
It meanders a bit, but I consider that one of your charm-points.I will be following this, definitely.
6465404
I've never heard my writing style described so well!
Alright, let's do this!
Coming back to say that I've read this a good half-dozen times, and cannot wait for more.
6465404 bit like talking to any "Good-ol'-boy": there are many, many rabbit trails to chase down before you get to the point.
You should do a short chapter where Pinkie doesn't come in time and Applejack spends her first night in town getting fucked without pause.
Well that's certainly an interesting start.
Different, but interesting.
Following, let's see how you'll handle the other chapters
It meanders a bit, but I consider that one of your charm-points.
I will be following this, definitely.
6465404
I've never heard my writing style described so well!
Alright, let's do this!
Coming back to say that I've read this a good half-dozen times, and cannot wait for more.
6465404 bit like talking to any "Good-ol'-boy": there are many, many rabbit trails to chase down before you get to the point.
You should do a short chapter where Pinkie doesn't come in time and Applejack spends her first night in town getting fucked without pause.