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Well that's certainly an interesting start.
Different, but interesting.
Following, let's see how you'll handle the other chapters
It meanders a bit, but I consider that one of your charm-points.
I will be following this, definitely.
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I've never heard my writing style described so well!
Alright, let's do this!
Coming back to say that I've read this a good half-dozen times, and cannot wait for more.
6465404 bit like talking to any "Good-ol'-boy": there are many, many rabbit trails to chase down before you get to the point.
More talkative than the usual cuddle-fucking I'm used to.
Still willing to read more to see where it ends up
You should do a short chapter where Pinkie doesn't come in time and Applejack spends her first night in town getting fucked without pause.
It returns...
*dun-dun-dun*
You should at least have AJ and Pinkie fucked hard before they make a comeback. Please, I'm begging you. Or at least do an alternate version of chapter 1 where AJ really does get fucked in the tavern.
Man, I wonder if Rarity is really dead. That just seems like it came by so quickly for a "main character" even if she wasn't playing one in this story. Will we get some more story advancement next chapter or good ol' perverseness? Perhaps both? Keep up the good work!
Great chapter all around. Nothin' like some good ol' first person fucking!
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Thanks bud!
And they fucked off, spilling white trails into the sunset
(or something like that.)
As StylinGreymon noted (years ago)
similar to Étienne de La Boétie in his writings.
Great conclusion non the less.
Hot read and pretty entertaining to boot with all of those southern-esque colloquialisms. Keep up the good work!