Wounds heal, scars fade, and bones mend; but a broken heart will always stay broken. Vinyl Scratch knows that. And she has to face the harsh relaity of it all.
Ok reading the first chapter and all is good, your passing is a bit out of wack and the thing you got going on between Octavea and Vynal Scratch feels a bit forced, and sped up. But for the first chapter, and a short one at that, it is good.
This was fun to work on, I'm glad I could be a part of it!
I know this is mainly sad but this is a sweet sounding story so far.
beautiful story!
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Thanks so much.
I'm glad you're liking it so far.
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Me too, bud. You're a great editor.
Yes! I am so happy to see this story posted! I wish you all the best with it, as it is honestly one of the best stories I've read recently.
Excellent start so far.
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Thanks.
Appreciate it :)
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You're too flattering.
Neon Lights approved!!!
~ Neon Lights
Oh another great Octascratch story from you? You do spoil us
Very nice one indeed, looking forward to the rest of it, though do give Sisters at heart some love again soon, kinda miss that one
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Not at all! You're simply that great of a writer.
Ok reading the first chapter and all is good, your passing is a bit out of wack and the thing you got going on between Octavea and Vynal Scratch feels a bit forced, and sped up.
But for the first chapter, and a short one at that, it is good.
6638784 how is nearly 8k words a short chapter?
What do you mean by
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I do agree that it partially feels a bit forced.