I guess this means you're back?

6713884 Somewhat. I just released a tease, is all.

6714240
Ah.

I like your story. It give the reader the feel they are the one that are in the place of your person. I have read many stories and this is one of the ones I will keep in my favourites. It is sad in the beginning and will make you cry on the second chapter. But I can see this will make it to the front of the web page someday.

it might already have.

6864987 Thanks, but I doubt it will make the front page. Perhaps one day, when I bother to upload it again.