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I'm... I'm just a little mad here... There are too many Spidermen with Symbiotes or are a symbiote... I'm not even reading this. Jeffery, Lee, and even some other dude I don't care about have done it. I'm pretty mad that you did this, as I was gonna have my Displaced Venom become Agent Venom later.

All I'm saying is that I'm really pissed...

Well, the worst that could happen... I don't want to think about.

In the synopsis:

"There" = "they're" (both instances of it).

I'm pretty sure the protagonist's name is Barry. Like, 90% sure.

Also...

Barry watched one hand on his hip. "Well how about that God it's like looking in mirror!" He shouted as the Hydra quivered slightly, the Hydra ran back into the forest disappearing into the darkness of the Everfree.

What? I don't understand this line of dialog. What was he trying to convey to us?

You know... My story out for like a week, gets good reviews.

Your stories out for like four hours and gets more likes comments and reviews overall...
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=NrKE_eTMlns

you have peaked my interest please continue

Oh my thisis interesting there is a second venom running around. This makes the symboites that are running around already going to have stroke trying to figure this out. Well this is awsome either way

Sarah it's London! What's the worst that can happen

Aliens

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*looks at coverart, recoiling in shock and horror*
You sent Deadpool with the Venom symbiote to Equestria!?!?!

6396325 When I see his name I think of Chuckle Vision and then I laugh to myself and think "to me" "to you" XD