looking good Truth

Chapters 1 and 2 are already with my editors.

This is off to a solid start.

I wish I could help with questions about Indian culture, but there's always been a wedge between me and that side of the family. I'd say my mother was a bitch, but I wouldn't want to insult any Diamond Dogs.

I might be able to help with metallurgy questions though. I took a lot of material science electives, and did a couple years of high precision machining.

Might want to add "this is a side story to TuP2" at the top of the description.

So far, it stands alone fairly well, but knowing who Razor Wit is, and what The Event is adds something to it.

6365838 Hey man you were the inspiration for it and it was your idea for me to write it. I may very well have some questions for you in the future. I just got Chapters 1 and 2 back from my editors as I am typing this on my phone. They should be up tomorrow before noon E.S.T.

Aww yeah!

Decent choice on music. The tone changed right as I read the words, "The EVENT! IT'S HERE!"

6366477 Then my timing was pretty close. That was bloody hard to do and I know that it wasn't the same way for most folks. Thanks for the fav and the comment.