Ever wake up in morning and for a few short moments you can only remember bits and pieces of your self? Ha, well that of think but expand it to about your whole life, that is what my life is now... Sounds fun right? Ya i don't think so
A short chapter, but good reasoning on why it's a short chapter. Wow twelve chapters already I'd say that this story is going rather well and as I keep saying I still enjoy it. I don't want to be rude here that's not my intention, but the family thing I feel was a bit rushed. It's not something bad and could simply be explained as Snowy being a little more emotional than she lets on and Luna being a cub that has been with snowy all this time might start to develop a sort of daughter like attachment to snowy. This is all I have to say but over all this story is actually pretty interesting.
6235046 Thanks! Though it was kinda rushed mainly because i suck at stuff like that, but the stuff that you said like 'More emotional then she lets on' is a really good idea
A short chapter, but good reasoning on why it's a short chapter. Wow twelve chapters already I'd say that this story is going rather well and as I keep saying I still enjoy it. I don't want to be rude here that's not my intention, but the family thing I feel was a bit rushed. It's not something bad and could simply be explained as Snowy being a little more emotional than she lets on and Luna being a cub that has been with snowy all this time might start to develop a sort of daughter like attachment to snowy. This is all I have to say but over all this story is actually pretty interesting.
6235046 Thanks! Though it was kinda rushed mainly because i suck at stuff like that, but the stuff that you said like 'More emotional then she lets on' is a really good idea