You thought you knew what Canterlot High is really like? Think Again. Co-written by Myself and Ringmaster1336
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Poor Spike.
Its always the psychopath that doesnt go out of their way to warn you theyre coming thats the most dangerous.
The one that makes it obvious, well theyre the most visible target.
KO nice chapters, Spike is going to scare the hell out of Garble.
6998001 True enough. Still, Garble is not to be underestimated. Stay tuned to see what happens next!
6999111 Thanks, I was hoping that people would like what Ringmaster and I are starting to do with the story. And yes, I also think Grable will be in for quite the surprise. Hope you're enjoying the story so far!
Hmm??? I am lost on this one. Why did Spike change his looks? Was he aiming for a "change how you look and how you feel" thing? He's done that already, working out to his limit everyday, removing every ounce of unnecessary fat, trying his hardest with others to improve himself. Obviously that wasn't enough but would a change of look do anything? Here is how it played out in my mind Spike was beaten up and was once again feeling powerless. At this point I imagine he hits rock bottom and needs something to restore his confidence he seems to have raised since bulking up. And his actions afterwards are where I am lost.
Maybe it's because personally I can't see the necessity of such actions. Honestly I am more afraid of piercings and needles than I am to wolfs and boars. I might have missed the point of sore lips and earlobes to cope with helplessness and shame. From my point of view he has changed his whole image, not as a natural progression of maturity and self discovery, but to cope with Grable as an outside stimulant. It is not a 'this is what I feel comfortable in' situation more in 'I need this' situation.
Then there is Rarity, OMG, Rarity, what. the. fuck. As promiscuous as she has been it never once occurred to her to have a female comapinion? What?? No seriously WHAT?! Why did it have to be Applejack and no i don't mean I hate the Applejack Rarity pairing but aside from one kiss there is no indication here. There is no problem if it remains in her fantasy or a dream or even a little late night material to get the gears moving but I highly doubt it will be that clear cut. But let's stick a pin in that for now. Why couldn't it have been Fluttershy? So far in the story it's made obvious that Fluttershy is Rarity's dress up doll and in all of this she never once viewed her as a sexual outlet? What? If later it's found out that Rarity did in fact have a thing for Fluttershy and Rarity moved on, can't say simply, after finding out that Fluttershy had a thing for bulk, okay, I take back this whole paragraph. I would very much like to see how that would be handled. Yet the question still remains why Applejack? Doesn't coco, the VP of Rarity's club, who she has spent arguably more time around before getting suspended, seem like a more reasonable choice. Yes I understand that love is not a choice, sometimes it is a spontaneous thing, but guess what that kind of love can also die spontenously. Hey do you all remember the fight Applejack and Rarity had near the beginning of this fic, the one where Applejack straight up called Rarity a slut? Yeah if they get together this is exactly what that fight turns into. Quote me on this "Dammit Rarity I hate what you're doin' 'cause I love you!" No seriously, unless it's put in such a way where Applejack rebuffs Rarity's feelings that is what that fight was. To finish off that fantasy thing that kind of stuff gnaws at your consience to a point where you can no longer be satisfied with a fantasy.
Yeah I wrote a lot but it can be summarized into these 2 points. Why did Spike change himself in such a physical, but ultimately useless way? Why Applejack?
since when tattoo and piercings, gains status of strength, agility, dexterity and intelligence and luck ??? Is not it easier to apprehend martial art ?!
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