July 7
it turns out Daizy Sky knows something I don`t about a changeling.
We have this ability to channel our energy into other things, like ponies and our own kind. It`s a little hard, but me and Daze managed to channel some into each other, her doing better than me.
I taught her how to cast magic, a few wards and blast spells, how to sense and eat emotions and how to fly like a changeling. We seem to get along pretty well, but she is a little hard-headed, and stubborn, and a show off. And more.
She really thinks that Twilight would blast her away just at sight. I told Daze to ask Twilight to stay the night, to say that were sisters or something, even though we look totally different.
But I have a plan
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I`ve disguised myself as a male blue and black paint unicorn, and Daze is currently an adult mare with wings and a black body.
Yep, were disguising our selves as the 'parents' of our... Well, disguises. I`ll write the results in later
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It went well somehow! Twilight agreed that me and Daze could share a room.
Now of course I don`t want to share one with her, I only wanted her to be here so I could teach her to survive and maybe even thrive.
But it`ll have to do until I can find a job, hopefully something to do with magic, I`d like to use my talent. It`s in my cutie mark after all!
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I think I found some sort of job. Rarity needs help with some gem enchanting, she apparently doesn`t know the spell, and it just never worked out with her level of magic. She wants me to make the gems super sparkly with my magic. Probably for some dresses so they would be a lot more valuable, the price being raised with shining gems by at least 1,000 bits.
Eh. I`d rather do something funner, but this will have to do. It`s 10 bits an hour, so that`s at least a little bit above average wage. Then I can either move, or at least get another room. Even for a kingdom this is a little cramped.
Well, night. I`ll write more tomorrow, I guess.
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You don't need a comma right before an "and" or an "or".
Not sure what you meant by flaring. If you meant the shaping the gems, then you should of using the term gem cutting or gem shaping. Thought that there should be a note as too why a unicorn needed a unicorn to cast a spell she already knows. Adds a bit of flavor.
Also a continuing typo is your use of the apostrophe, or the lack thereof.
You keep on using the backtick(`) instead of an apostrophe(').
Example:
don`t -> don't
I`ll -> I'll
I`m -> I'm
it`ll -> it'll
It`s -> It's
6178170 Thank you~
No pony ever notices the (`), even though it is supposed to be a ('), the way I type has already set in, so I hope that doesn`t really need attention.
I fixed some of the parts, including the collapsing building and Twilight`s spell.