After reading the description, this went onto my Read Later bookshelf; I just read both current chapters, and am very intrigued so far. It makes me wonder if they'll ever find out what this creature is, or at least where it's from. But I think the M.o.P. creating some seriously fucked up things during the war is something that needs to appear in Fo:E stories more often; it adds an interesting element to the story as a whole, regardless if the creation survives to see the Wasteland or not. The creature's behavior only excites me further, and in my opinion makes it even more frightening, not appearing to notice when it's harming others until it's sometimes too late. Yes, this story probably doesn't deserve as many dislikes as it has, but I say don't let that stop you; keep going until the end.
6191478 Oh I won't let some silly dislike's stop me. I suspect those are from some silly FoE haters and maybe a few who didn't like how the title was spelled
I am very glad you liked it. I have a lot of fun things planned for this. It won't be too incredibly long and I'm not sure how often it will update because the other FoE fic I'm writing is my primary focus but rest assured I am working on thee next chapter and will have it ready soon and won't forget about it
6191478 And most importantly, thank you for your kind words and interest in my story
I hope to get some cover art soon but the person I have slated to do it has a very busy schedule.
If you liked this enough I also have to point you in the direction of my other FoE story: Dirty Deeds. First serious story I have ever done and my primary focus. You might enjoy that as well.
Glad to see you published this at last, Kyle!
Forget to tell me about upcoming chapters and I will hunt you down.
After reading the description, this went onto my Read Later bookshelf; I just read both current chapters, and am very intrigued so far. It makes me wonder if they'll ever find out what this creature is, or at least where it's from. But I think the M.o.P. creating some seriously fucked up things during the war is something that needs to appear in Fo:E stories more often; it adds an interesting element to the story as a whole, regardless if the creation survives to see the Wasteland or not. The creature's behavior only excites me further, and in my opinion makes it even more frightening, not appearing to notice when it's harming others until it's sometimes too late. Yes, this story probably doesn't deserve as many dislikes as it has, but I say don't let that stop you; keep going until the end.
6191478 Oh I won't let some silly dislike's stop me. I suspect those are from some silly FoE haters and maybe a few who didn't like how the title was spelled
I am very glad you liked it. I have a lot of fun things planned for this. It won't be too incredibly long and I'm not sure how often it will update because the other FoE fic I'm writing is my primary focus but rest assured I am working on thee next chapter and will have it ready soon and won't forget about it
6191478 And most importantly, thank you for your kind words and interest in my story
I hope to get some cover art soon but the person I have slated to do it has a very busy schedule.
If you liked this enough I also have to point you in the direction of my other FoE story: Dirty Deeds. First serious story I have ever done and my primary focus. You might enjoy that as well.