Twilight needs to perfect a previously un-mastered spell for an upcoming magic expo, and picks Rainbow Dash as her unknowing test subject. However, the "harmless experiment" quickly gets out of hoof...
Oh god, when Rainbow finds out she's going to be so mad. Also, I don't see how Twilight thinks she's going to win this contest. I mean, for one thing, there's no way Dash will agree to being shown off as a test subject. Secondly, there's the small matter of THE SERIOUS ETHICAL BREACH! Just saying.
Also, I should mention, you seem to have a habit of not having spaces after commas, there's a lot of that in this story.
Oh god, when Rainbow finds out she's going to be so mad. Also, I don't see how Twilight thinks she's going to win this contest. I mean, for one thing, there's no way Dash will agree to being shown off as a test subject. Secondly, there's the small matter of THE SERIOUS ETHICAL BREACH! Just saying.
Also, I should mention, you seem to have a habit of not having spaces after commas, there's a lot of that in this story.
6155097 ethics shmethics, it's for
SCIENCEMAGIC!