The war between covenant and UNSC have raged on since 2534. "All UNSC solider's report to there battle stations Repeat ALL NCSU REPORT TO THERE BATTLE STATIONS!" ordered the ships speakers as the UNSC troopers ran to there ion cannons and laser riffles.
"Sir the covenant ships are coming out of hiperspace sir"yelled a young trooper in my team.
"Nice work dice," yelled the captain as the young solider saluted the captain and ran ahead into the brige of the ship. A Purple ship suddenly appered from Hiperspace and opened fire on owed ship. "Destroy there hanger" yelled the captain and with those words the crew emediantlly opened fire on the hanger which started to open. A banshee was emediantlly shot and exploded right inside the hanger as two more exploded and destroyed the hanger and part of the hull.
"Sir, the ships command centers shields are down we are opening fire." At that minute the laser cannons emediantlly turned to the captions station of the Elite cruiser. "FIRE!!!!!!" Yelled the caption as the guns started blasting the elite cruisers which started to turn but suddenly exploded busting it completely in half.
"Nice" said simon hifiving Alex.
Sir another ship is coming out of the void! "Wait wha..." But he wasn't able to finish his sentence as an old ship suddenly came out of hyperspace and crashed into the hull sending a crew member over the side and into another. "What was that!" Yelled the captain.
"It's some ripe of rusted ship,Sir." Said private jack.
"No,no,no,no,no,no,no,no" mumbled Alex who emediantlly new who they were. "The Flood" He mumbled.
This is my first time actually righting a story so do tell what I did wrong.
Holy shit
Not hating in fact its a cool idea
But the UNSC didn't have laser rifles and ion cannons
Also I do not normally care about spelling but there were definitely spelling errors
I'm not sure what the NCSU is either
Or the covinit
I do however know what the *UNSC and *Covenent are
I don't know just fix all that up and make it longer and I think it will be ok
6080186 dude reread the chapter and if you cant find whats wrong ill tell you
sounds like a good story but needs some major editing and revising if you want some help i might be able to help no guarantees though