What ever shall we do today?
A trio of oddly similar looking mares made their way through the beautiful town of Ponyville. One of these mares, definitely the least enthusiastic of the bunch was busy trying to comprehend why it is she agreed to hang out with these lunatics. Another, was flying beside the others, a smile wide as a smile can be across her face. Perhaps for no actual reason, just smiling for smiles sake. And the last, a pony known only as Pinkie Pie. The gears in her brain turning about all the fun she and her brand new friends were going to have.
The party pony brought their group to a sudden halt.
"Ok, everypony. WHOS READY FOR SOME FUN!" Pinkie was hyped to have some fun with her manifested personalities.
"I KNOW I AM!" Surprise was equally as excited for some good times... if not more so.
"Whoopdy bucking Do." Sighed Pinkamena, twirling her hoof in the air.
Surprise gasped. "Language!"
With another exaggerated roll of the eyes, Pinkamena responded, "Pardon my French your highness..." The mare could not have possibly looked more unenthused about everything as she did in that moment.
"What?" Confusion evident on the poor Pegasus's face. "What French? I didn't hear any French, all I heard was you and your naughty mouth."
"OK EVERYPONY!" Pinkie had decided it'd be best to interrupt that conversation before it got... heated.
"What do you guys want to do today? I want us all to have a fun filled day. Filled with funtastic super fun!"
The next minute or so was filled with quiet, as the mares tried to think of something to do.
Finally, the Pegasus and Straight maned Earth pony answered, "No ideas here." Almost in a perfect unison.
"How about I introduce you guys to my friends!" Pinkie mentally patted herself on the back for the fantastic suggestion.
"Alrighty tighty!" cheered Surprise. Doing a small aerial summersault, broadcasting her joy.
"Meh, I guess I don't have anything better." still as monotone as ever.
"Then its a plan!" Pinkie stood up and led her new buds to meet her friends. Pinkie Pie couldn't wait to have her friends meet her two new selves.
Are you guys ready for chapter 3! Cause here it is.
A very, very short chapter, I know.
But I hope you all may enjoy it regardless.
Tell me what you guys think of the fic so far,
as always, constructive criticism is appreciated.
And I look forward to writing/releasing chapter 4 
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I like that you've written Pinkie as if she's a bit more aware of what she's dealing with right now. (Like when she interrupts the two before they start arguing) Better than in the show where she just sort of went with her thousand clones and didn't think about it.
Pleas, for the love of Celestia, make Rainbow Dash's meeting with Pinkamena funny. Like a freak out about Party of One, or just make her shutter a lot around her.
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Pinkie is my favorite pony. And while we all know the show doesn't always handle her character as well as they could, when they do its fantastic. And I'm aware Pinkie is this, crazy random, out of control party pony. I like to write her as just that. I can't stand it when people make Pinkie out to be stupid, and unaware of her surroundings. I try to make the most out of these characters 
Why thank you
5814693 Most of the time they just make her out to be a complete psycho-pony. I'm glad you wrote her like this.
"OH MI GAWD THIS ISN'T TEH ESTABISHEEDDDD PINKAMENA OF THE FANFICTION AND WHA-" angry ranting nerd halted by getting a pink punch to the face and a party cannon to the mouth.
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I MAKE OWN PINKAMENA ESTABLISHMENTS!
I'm aware this isn't the way Pinkamena is generally written. But I'm trying to steer clear of any Grimdarks, or non-grimdark Pinkamena clichés. I'm writing her a depressed, angry, short tempered, and a bit anti-social. (With a somewhat depressing backstory I might add.) But we haven't gotten to that part yet.
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And I love that.
You break from that stereotype of Pinkamena.
I love that.
Banana.
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Bananas indeed my friend, bananas indeed.
I'm so sorry about this but my inner self broke through
Smile as wide as a smile.... don't you mean smile as wide as a mile?
I'm so sorry, she's an evil grammar Nazi, I'm sorry you had to meet her!