Children, such a word can be described as the single most precious word for any parent, who hopes to embrace one of their own.
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I like this story so far. Aiden's brotherly affection towards Rarity and Sweetie is cute and his interaction with a Twilight and Shy is adorable. I hope the next chapter of this story comes soon.
*reads story* !!!!!!!! *smiles like pinkie pie on drugs*
I dont like it ..... I LOVE IT
haz potential. shall keep an eye on it
What does Aiden look like?
I love this story sooooo much!!!
It's best! I can't wait for more!!!
Ps. Filly why is so adorable it makes me wanna explode! :D
Sorry mate, but I'm downvoting this one. Grammar, sentence structure and dialogue are all shoddy at best and had me cringing from the beginning. I couldn't bring myself to actually read past the third paragraph, and had to skim from there in order to at least give the plotline a shot. Unfortunately this looks to be another one of those wish-fulfillment type things, and while I certainly have no room to judge based on that fact alone as I'm currently fleshing out the plan for one of my own, I simply not interested enough in the situation you've presented to give it a pass either.
That having been said, don't stop writing just because one guy on the internet didn't enjoy your story. I may not like reading it, but so long as you like writing it it'll be worth your time. Never forget that.
I love how this story is starting out. Aiden also being affected by the Sonic Rainboom. Will he be an Element of Harmony as well?
I like this so far, also nice choice of magic for him