Best fic involving Rarity and Twilight I've read yet!!

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Thank you so very much. None of these ships are my usual ships. So it was interesting writing this.

I'm trying to work on chapter three, but it's slow in developing. It will be finished at some point though. It's the further adventure of Twilight and Rarity.

Thanks again.

Aww, adorable and hot. I love how she comforts her, walking her through it.

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Horses? I don't write about horses.
Ponies. Now those I write about.
They are fillyfoolers, yes. At least in this particular story. If that's not what you're looking for then... I don't know what to tell you other than try to find a different story I guess.

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I guess, depending on your point of view and how out of context you want to take it, consensual sex can be considered rape too. Which is exactly what it sounds like you're trying to do here. Way out of context.

Is Twilight restrained? Nope. Is she being forcibly coerced? Nope. Threatened? Nope. Is she able to leave at any time? Yep.

Nopony forced anything on another pony. Rarity made advances and not being told to stop by Twi she marches forward. She even asks Twi to take over and she tells Rarity to continue. Not sure how that makes it rape. At no point does Twilight ever tell Rarity or any of the others to stop. Nor is she forced into doing something that she really doesn't want to do. She may have been nervous in the beginning, but then starts to really get into it. Seems pretty rapeless to me.

See it how you want, but that is NOT what this story is about. I can point you in the direction of a few that are indeed about just that if you'd like.

6586855 Are you fucking serious? They practically pressure her into having sex when she obviously didn't want it in the first place, also know as raaaaape. Then there's people in Twilight's position where she's never had sex and doesn't want to. Some people are offended because they say that everyone should have sex because it's natural. Now, if that's where it stopped, I'd be okay. But no. What happens is they force that person to have sex with them as a way of 'correcting' that persons view. What actually happens is the victim now links sex to a traumatic experience making them even more less likely to have it ever again.

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Obviously you didn't read the rest of the story then?

Good thing. It might upset you more.

Because she does have sex. AND, god forbid, she enjoyed it.

Whaaa!? How does that happen? Someone enjoying sex. The nerve!

You'll love the next chapter then. What are your feelings about BDSM? I'm more of a bondage only pony myself.

But you are right. Sex is all about pressuring the other party to partake in the act. 99% of first time sexual partners are coerced into it by the other.
So we will go into a first time together scenario shall we. The couple dates, and one wants to have sex while the other is unsure (notice I said unsure). The one will pressure the other until 1) the other gives in; or 2) the other refuses and someone leaves. If we stay on your thought line #1 is rape. Lets say the other decides that they want to proceed and have sex. They still have been coerced into this decision. Again, your train of thought is that is rape. Yet, because the other didn't say no and proceeded to have sex in real life it's not rape. The only time, in your view, that sex not considered rape would be if both parties want to have it equally? And I'm talking first time sex, such as Twilight. It happens in romance novels, but rarely in real life.

When was it obvious that Twilight didn't want it?
And she WAS able to leave at any time.
Which means to me that you must be reading your experience into this story. I am very sorry that something like that had to happen to you, but at no time is anypony remotely raped in my story. Coerced, yes. As are 99% of people/ponies. Raped, no.

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You'll love the next chapter then. What are your feelings about BDSM? I'm more of a bondage only pony myself.

You have fucking won me over with just that sentence.

I want Rarity. I want to do all that stuff I saw the girls doing, to themselves and each other, to Rarity.

And that has killed the mood... But if there's BDSM in the future I'm all for it!

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Well... I have to be honest. I have misled you. There is some restraining, but... not BDSM really. I can't give away the chapter. It is still in work at the moment after all.

I also feel I need to apologize. I am rather defensive of my stories. And someone reading into it something that is not meant to be there... well... gets me a bit agitated. Anyway. I do feel bad that you don't like it as much as I would have hoped.

I thank you for reading it anyway.

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I also feel I need to apologize. I am rather defensive of my stories. And someone reading into it something that is not meant to be there... well... gets me a bit agitated

Don't worry about it! I'm the exact same way. Also, simply restraining is fine, too. It's only a little lower than full on BDSM, in my book.

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I need to thank you. You inspired me to complete the story. It needs a bit of editing still, but it is for the most part done. I'm not sure how soon the chapter will be posted, but I hope not long. Depends on how editing goes.
So...
Thank you very much.

6589604 Np!