Really excited to see more from this story, I especially like how Discord is written, and that we got to hear more of the main cast in this one. Keep going!

638520

Thank you! Pinkie's gotta have her friends around!

cant wait to read more

638634

Thank you! Now that I've got an official beta, it will be a lot easier to pump out chapters.
(I had to coerce my boyfriend into reading it aloud and looking for mistakes before haha)

I'm not much of a fan of villain redemption, but I have to admit, this has promise!
Can't wait to see more in the future.

638701

Thank you! That's very flattering, I appreciate it!

YAY new chapter! :D
i love how this is going and Discord is written so well its his personality! X3
hope to see the next chapter soon ^_^

638936

Thank you!

as far as i know Fluttershy never calls anyone darling, thats what Rarity does

this is right good

Honestly not going to lie; I really like character redemption. I never feel it's quite fair how one-shot villains get treated. So far I'm really liking this version of it; most of the time it seems to be Twilight doing the reformation and that does get slightly tiresome. So thank you for the interesting story.

640011

Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying it so far

643447
Your welcome.

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I wasn't sure about that word to be honest, but she does say it when feeling empathy from what I can tell.
Like this.

It just felt right in the moment
What do you think other than that?

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Well thank ya sugar cube!

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>>Doctor Anatomy LOL

Darling, they won’t be mad at you.

That's something oly Rarity would say.

“I don’t think… Discord is not evil.”

Big line in the story, and it kind of got mangled. Anyway, no new mechanical issues, though the recurring ones are still there. And there were some out of character moments, like Fluttershy saying "darling." And I have to say I think the other girls kind of agreed with Pinkie a bit too fast when a dissenter could have spiced things up a bit. And I'm kind of wary of the others thinking Discord is guiltless. Even in your own story, in the first chapter, Discord showed his true colors when he turned Cheerliee's schoolhouse into a gingerbread house and laughed at her distress. He still takes joy in other's pain; he laughs at them, not with them. Eternal imprisonment is still harsh, yeah, but I'm a bit concerned the story won't totally acknowledge his sadist, borderline sociopathic tendencies. Will continue reading, but getting kind of hesitant.