While this chapter was the purest definition of the word adorable... I must admit it did seem pretty rushed and not that much structured. However I did still enjoy it.
I'm not offended. My beta said as much and I was thinking it the whole time. But instead of mulling it over forever I decided to just throw it up here and get on with the story.
1657739 No worries bro... I understand. Besides it's still pretty good and still shows a lot of character development between Pinkie and Discord's relationship. Just a tad bit rushed is all.
A bit. I haven't really found the motivation to write... Too busy enjoying Christmas traditions I suppose. I do have a good chunk written, I'm just not sure where to go with it.
I will try to have it done for Christmas, a little present for you all, if I can
While this chapter was the purest definition of the word adorable... I must admit it did seem pretty rushed and not that much structured. However I did still enjoy it.
Ha ha! t'is adorable!!!
Loved that ending part there. Pinkie, why are you so adorable?
Also, lol space heater. I have no idea why, but I just found that line funny!
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I'm not offended. My beta said as much and I was thinking it the whole time. But instead of mulling it over forever I decided to just throw it up here and get on with the story.
I feel bad when I leave everyone in suspense :(
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That was a line I thought hilarious at 2 in the the morning xD
Everything is more funny after your brain starts to shut down for the night haha
1657739 No worries bro... I understand. Besides it's still pretty good and still shows a lot of character development between Pinkie and Discord's relationship. Just a tad bit rushed is all.
yes! YES! they are getting closer! X3
keep it up! its getting so good! :D
that was a pure shot of sugar water strait in the heart
diabetes in a bottle
sugar rush in a pill
been a wile tough... writers block any?
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A bit.
I haven't really found the motivation to write... Too busy enjoying Christmas traditions I suppose.
I do have a good chunk written, I'm just not sure where to go with it.
I will try to have it done for Christmas, a little present for you all, if I can
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I'm still glad you are taking the time to comment!
Unless I misunderstood the chapter... They slept in bed together? Sorry, just male.... And female in the same bed.
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Yes they did sleep in the same bed. Keep in mind that there isn't any sexual feelings between them (at this point)