Mankind has finally reached the stars and is now attempting to reach other systems in the galaxy. What will happen when one man finds himself stuck, unable to return home, on a strange new world with talking ponies?
Well this is coming along great so far and I really enjoyed the interaction with Luna so far and I hope for more friendliness and maybe something more along the way
Interesting chapter so far.^^ Though, you're making the romance waaaaay too quick. Taking an interest is one thing, but for feelings to come from just a look in the eye? Waaaay too quick, and that's even concerning the fan theory about ponies living in a society where 'herds' are not unheard of, despite their uncommon nature.
Oh, and pretty sure I already discussed my theories about Changelings with ya. May I discuss a few other ideas I had as well? Recently been having some ideas on Luna's Bat-ponies, a.k.a. Thestrals.^^
5729098 I wasn't sure how to make her stand out more to Radel. So I apologize if it seems rushed. Next chapter won't feel like it though, they'll develop a strong friendship over the next few chapters.
5728703 Oh they will have more friendly interaction, and maybe more in the coming chapters.
Just so some of you know, mainly those that think I'm bringing out romance a little too quick, this is what I was trying to express. Luna and Celestia are more friendly and relaxed around Radel due to reasons that will be brought up in the next chapter. This is why they don't seem like royalty at the moment. I wa also trying to picture Luna as one who is more playful and laid back than Celestia.
Also that strange connection/attraction Radel felt towards Luna is based off something else other than love that we will see developed in the following chapters. Hope you guys continue to enjoy!
I hope that this will be a herd fic with Celestia and Luna. if not I hope Celestia is the love interest there's not many stories were tia is the love interest.
I don't like commenting it ill I've caught up with a story but I feel this needs be said, I'm really enjoying your work, but have a couple of minor gripes. The first being that I would have liked to have seen some more development before the action started. And of course there's the fact that Radel basically falls for Luna at first sight. I mean even Jake Sully to the time to get to know the culture before getting some alien poon
Jokes aside its a very nice read and will be continuing on happily. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Well this is coming along great so far and I really enjoyed the interaction with Luna so far and I hope for more friendliness and maybe something more along the way
Interesting chapter so far.^^ Though, you're making the romance waaaaay too quick. Taking an interest is one thing, but for feelings to come from just a look in the eye? Waaaay too quick, and that's even concerning the fan theory about ponies living in a society where 'herds' are not unheard of, despite their uncommon nature.
Oh, and pretty sure I already discussed my theories about Changelings with ya. May I discuss a few other ideas I had as well? Recently been having some ideas on Luna's Bat-ponies, a.k.a. Thestrals.^^
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I wasn't sure how to make her stand out more to Radel. So I apologize if it seems rushed. Next chapter won't feel like it though, they'll develop a strong friendship over the next few chapters.
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Oh they will have more friendly interaction, and maybe more in the coming chapters.
5729124 Good to hear.^^ Oh, and will there be a herd concept in this, or just one-on-one romance?
And may we discuss the other mentioned ideas, by the way?(Your choice, of course.^^)
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We shall see what relationships develop in the next chapters. And maybe another time through PM or Skype we can discuss that.
5729427 Fine by me.^^ I have skype right now, actually. Just multi-taskin' with helping my mom with her garden. My screen name is regrem_erutaerc
Just so some of you know, mainly those that think I'm bringing out romance a little too quick, this is what I was trying to express. Luna and Celestia are more friendly and relaxed around Radel due to reasons that will be brought up in the next chapter. This is why they don't seem like royalty at the moment. I wa also trying to picture Luna as one who is more playful and laid back than Celestia.
Also that strange connection/attraction Radel felt towards Luna is based off something else other than love that we will see developed in the following chapters. Hope you guys continue to enjoy!
Really enjoying this Story! Can't wait to see how things develop!
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Thank you!
For everyone's knowledge: Possible Delays
I hope that this will be a herd fic with Celestia and Luna. if not I hope Celestia is the love interest there's not many stories were tia is the love interest.
also you get a like and a fav
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Thank you, but sadly Luna will be the main interest. But who knows, maybe more royalty will be involved?
Thank you for telling me I like the story and will keep reading. but this dose mean ill need to continue my search.
I don't like commenting it ill I've caught up with a story but I feel this needs be said, I'm really enjoying your work, but have a couple of minor gripes. The first being that I would have liked to have seen some more development before the action started. And of course there's the fact that Radel basically falls for Luna at first sight. I mean even Jake Sully to the time to get to know the culture before getting some alien poon
Jokes aside its a very nice read and will be continuing on happily. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Well, not will. Totally awesome work, great fight scenes, and this, bloom of interest, suits my tastes...
Do you mean a princess sized bed?
*crickets chirping*