Victor, not the normal child like others as he quickly had to 'pretend' to be normal. Who rooted for the villain that was worthy of his attention hoping to be the same when he grew up, well our watchers through the void, he has gotten his wish.
Ok, this seems like an excellent story. I like how the girls and the Princesses seem to have taken being superheroes as a hobby/profession. Also, Lyra's interaction with Doom is hillarious.
5621383 We are pleased to hear of reactions to the ponies mentioned, we also feel that our little doom will have more than a handful with the one named lyra, if not the other heroes and villains.
5621355 We are pleased that there is potential from this response.
Looks good. Will fave. It looks though you're going to add other OCs. Just some advice, don't add too many. It makes it hard to keep track of who everyone is and what they're doing.
5622089 We understand the gravity of such choices as we hath even attended many a game of dungeons at a table with other unspeakable horrors, which sometimes are rather fun. though we shall stick with the rule of THREE for OCs, like how many active humans we must tend to.
5622163 no i mean from what i have seen one of the many reasons why Villains always lose is because they do not trust and keep Allies and looking at Dooms personality in this story he will most likely gain more enemies then Allies.
5622170 We shall on this subject limit the number to only THREE, as it may be either a hero/heroine or a villain/villainess. or even a background minion or citizen.
5622173 Thou brings up a good point though let us say that certain things may happen that will offer chances of growth and 'friends'.
5622179 people love a stern yet kind king and from what is see from lyra is that she maybe be a good type of loyal Minion one that is some what smart and knows when to shut up and think. or i hope so anyway
5622761 We think there may be chances for her to help open our Victor Von Doom to improve his opinion starting with her, though from what we see she'll latch onto him to be there for him. Warnings should be given that she may suffer or benefit from being with our little human.
5627183 Quite so, it will not be a easy journey nor a fast one as his bias may leave him open. But it simply depends on how he will adjust to his new world, but we think he is slightly 'upset' with us without warning ahead of time.
Thou must admit if someone walked up and offered a permanent resettlement into another universe would thou think they be crazy, nuts or bonkers?
similar woes or the same ones, if I even see that Mary Richards I will just ignore her at best and make believe above is meant to be foe's
on other topic... that would certainly dissuade a lot of crime if the ' interferer' were probing them... thankfully I doubt that will be a problem but it would certainly send most smaller job criminals hurrying to any other city.
2. I wonder how he'll react to the sort of forced polygamy, after all with this gender imbalance of 75 to 90% female and 25 to 10% male. And this is only the entirety of the pony population, I don't know about the other species though. But I do know that polygamy is widely (as in the entire planet) exapted.
It has potential and i like it so far.
Ok, this seems like an excellent story. I like how the girls and the Princesses seem to have taken being superheroes as a hobby/profession. Also, Lyra's interaction with Doom is hillarious.
5621383 We are pleased to hear of reactions to the ponies mentioned, we also feel that our little doom will have more than a handful with the one named lyra, if not the other heroes and villains.
5621355 We are pleased that there is potential from this response.
5621570 Yep, hope to see more of Doom's adventures soon. I'm curious as to how Bictor will use Doom's abilities.
5621593 We the mistype but also glad for the anticipation, though we wonder how he will be welcomed? *an ever so slight grin forms.*
Lyra is in heat near a human.
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5621638 Yes, we believe the early stages of it from what 'Saddle Rager' said. What doth thou think of those shown and presented?
5621642
it's good.
and I'm glad the human doesn't act like a normal villan.
5621645 What does thou think of the princesses?
5621649
funny, and good, not good at giving descriptions.
5621666 It tis fine as we at least feel broadened by the current comments.
it makes me wonder if he is going to A: make a base outside the town or b: take over a country
5622033 We believe careful planning may result in bigger things being done, also that would be something Doctor Doom would do, correct?
Looks good. Will fave. It looks though you're going to add other OCs. Just some advice, don't add too many. It makes it hard to keep track of who everyone is and what they're doing.
5622089 We understand the gravity of such choices as we hath even attended many a game of dungeons at a table with other unspeakable horrors, which sometimes are rather fun. though we shall stick with the rule of THREE for OCs, like how many active humans we must tend to.
5622038 yes but Doom also suffers from from Arrogant Villain Syndrome so he will do stupid option's
5622119 True but we are not dealing with the real doom now are we?
5622129 he is not Perfect so he will make mistakes also i think that it would be somewhat hard for him to gain Allies
5622148 Rather true, he may have to try looking for the evil market or some such we think. But there was an item to act as a clue.
Looks good. Will enjoy a second chapter. What's this about ?
Are you saying people can ask for their OCs to join the adventure?
5622163 no i mean from what i have seen one of the many reasons why Villains always lose is because they do not trust and keep Allies and looking at Dooms personality in this story he will most likely gain more enemies then Allies.
5622170 We shall on this subject limit the number to only THREE, as it may be either a hero/heroine or a villain/villainess. or even a background minion or citizen.
5622173 Thou brings up a good point though let us say that certain things may happen that will offer chances of growth and 'friends'.
5622179 people love a stern yet kind king and from what is see from lyra is that she maybe be a good type of loyal Minion one that is some what smart and knows when to shut up and think. or i hope so anyway
5622761 We think there may be chances for her to help open our Victor Von Doom to improve his opinion starting with her, though from what we see she'll latch onto him to be there for him. Warnings should be given that she may suffer or benefit from being with our little human.
i was wondering when someone does a Dr.Doom in mlp story.
5624452 We are wondering if thou will enjoy the journey.
5625113 We will hope to be most enlighten with this tale of conquest and fire.
5627183 Quite so, it will not be a easy journey nor a fast one as his bias may leave him open. But it simply depends on how he will adjust to his new world, but we think he is slightly 'upset' with us without warning ahead of time.
Thou must admit if someone walked up and offered a permanent resettlement into another universe would thou think they be crazy, nuts or bonkers?
similar woes or the same ones, if I even see that Mary Richards I will just ignore her at best and make
believe above is meant to be foe's
on other topic... that would certainly dissuade a lot of crime if the ' interferer' were probing them... thankfully I doubt that will be a problem but it would certainly send most smaller job criminals hurrying to any other city.
Two things:
1. I wonder how he'll react to heat season?
2. I wonder how he'll react to the sort of forced polygamy, after all with this gender imbalance of 75 to 90% female and 25 to 10% male. And this is only the entirety of the pony population, I don't know about the other species though. But I do know that polygamy is widely (as in the entire planet) exapted.