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Architect of Realities
We are both the maker and the destroyer, our will bends and makes realms or agents whom act in our stead. Many fear us for we try to bring change weather great or small due to our scattered reasoning.
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It has potential and i like it so far.
Ok, this seems like an excellent story. I like how the girls and the Princesses seem to have taken being superheroes as a hobby/profession. Also, Lyra's interaction with Doom is hillarious.
5621383 We are pleased to hear of reactions to the ponies mentioned, we also feel that our little doom will have more than a handful with the one named lyra, if not the other heroes and villains.
5621355 We are pleased that there is potential from this response.
5621570 Yep, hope to see more of Doom's adventures soon. I'm curious as to how Bictor will use Doom's abilities.
5621593 We the mistype but also glad for the anticipation, though we wonder how he will be welcomed? *an ever so slight grin forms.*
Lyra is in heat near a human.
...........
5621638 Yes, we believe the early stages of it from what 'Saddle Rager' said. What doth thou think of those shown and presented?
5621642
it's good.
and I'm glad the human doesn't act like a normal villan.
5621645 What does thou think of the princesses?
5621649
funny, and good, not good at giving descriptions.
5621666 It tis fine as we at least feel broadened by the current comments.
it makes me wonder if he is going to A: make a base outside the town or b: take over a country
5622033 We believe careful planning may result in bigger things being done, also that would be something Doctor Doom would do, correct?
Looks good. Will fave. It looks though you're going to add other OCs. Just some advice, don't add too many. It makes it hard to keep track of who everyone is and what they're doing.
5622089 We understand the gravity of such choices as we hath even attended many a game of dungeons at a table with other unspeakable horrors, which sometimes are rather fun. though we shall stick with the rule of THREE for OCs, like how many active humans we must tend to.
5622038 yes but Doom also suffers from from Arrogant Villain Syndrome so he will do stupid option's
5622119 True but we are not dealing with the real doom now are we?
5622129 he is not Perfect so he will make mistakes also i think that it would be somewhat hard for him to gain Allies
5622148 Rather true, he may have to try looking for the evil market or some such we think. But there was an item to act as a clue.
Looks good. Will enjoy a second chapter. What's this about ?
Are you saying people can ask for their OCs to join the adventure?
5622163 no i mean from what i have seen one of the many reasons why Villains always lose is because they do not trust and keep Allies and looking at Dooms personality in this story he will most likely gain more enemies then Allies.
5622170 We shall on this subject limit the number to only THREE, as it may be either a hero/heroine or a villain/villainess. or even a background minion or citizen.
5622173 Thou brings up a good point though let us say that certain things may happen that will offer chances of growth and 'friends'.
5622179 people love a stern yet kind king and from what is see from lyra is that she maybe be a good type of loyal Minion one that is some what smart and knows when to shut up and think. or i hope so anyway
5622761 We think there may be chances for her to help open our Victor Von Doom to improve his opinion starting with her, though from what we see she'll latch onto him to be there for him. Warnings should be given that she may suffer or benefit from being with our little human.
i was wondering when someone does a Dr.Doom in mlp story.
5624452 We are wondering if thou will enjoy the journey.
5625113 We will hope to be most enlighten with this tale of conquest and fire.
5627183 Quite so, it will not be a easy journey nor a fast one as his bias may leave him open. But it simply depends on how he will adjust to his new world, but we think he is slightly 'upset' with us without warning ahead of time.
Thou must admit if someone walked up and offered a permanent resettlement into another universe would thou think they be crazy, nuts or bonkers?
Batmare
Absolutely loved the chapter, especially Lyra's flirting. Her melody was nice.
5659357 Oh really? we wonder how thou would have rated her flirting, also what else did thou think of character interaction?
5659364 Somehow I find Lyra's love for Victor and childish willingness to be a he charge to be oddly sweet and adorable...even if she's being naive by helping a future criminal out of her infatuation with him.
5659389 We often believe that the pony species in more modern times are far more naive than their medieval counterparts of old.
5658562 Indeed, though what else did thou enjoy of this chapter?
5659861 Lyar trying to woo Mr doom that just made me smile.
na-na-na-na na-na-nA-NA BATMARE!!!!
PLEASE, keep this story up!!!! NO CUTTING out on us right in the middle like so many other have done
5712090 Do not fret as we shall keep going, though delayed at times due to the scrying of events and inspiration. we ask how thou thought of this one.
I really enjoyed this chapter. It was shocking to see Zecora working as an informant and entertaining to watch Victor deal with Zapp, Filli, and the timberwolves. Lyra was also adorable through the chapter with her eagerness at being Lyrical Silence, her excitement at being hugged by Victor, and getting her first kiss. I also liked Filli's happy attitude when you (author) described and complimented her figure. I really liked the chapter and I hope to see the next one soon.
5712641 We are truly happy for reading these statements, though do take note that things are a 'bit' jumbled though it is still during the 'episodes' just slightly different thou could say due to the 'setting'. though we are glad thou enjoyed such interactions with the beings in our little 'doom's' new home.
similar woes or the same ones, if I even see that Mary Richards I will just ignore her at best and make
believe above is meant to be foe's
on other topic... that would certainly dissuade a lot of crime if the ' interferer' were probing them... thankfully I doubt that will be a problem but it would certainly send most smaller job criminals hurrying to any other city.
5755513 Or it may bring about a better class of criminal depending on things to come.
5755526 Certainly true but , no more than any other fire under someone's behind would make them develop skills and talents to avoid the cell, bullet, or probing ... . Ultimately its more likely to encourage those trying the easier way while still new away from the career path if available, those who have no choice well they get better or fall as sadly is to be expected ( if they go to jail they'll break or harden and learn from those more and less experienced... or well you know).
Ultimately challenge breeds better, you can try to whittle and drive off the numbers so there's less but there's likely always to be some because they have to or they have a reason to. that's really what its about, limiting the candidates for development of skills it wont stop most of the bosses of crime but it'll make manpower more difficult. they'll always improve to try to keep up, but if you can stop and 'encourage' other paths or area's at least of some you'll have less to deal with and if your a ' vigilante hero' you don't have to stop at that and can at least create a established vacuum to use to limit who plays and by what rules. ( always be some trying to take advantage, it in the end is about managing ... a few stronger more isolated may be a lot easier to handle then a city full of developing potential with a goal of surviving you. ... after all you can keep tabs on a few dozen but a few hundred or more you can only be in so many places at once and there's always a blind spot better to minimize it to manage )
also doom can play double rolls limit the crime and take control ... (creates opposition but could help limit what's allowed to at least minimize the particularly bad crime if nothing else, at least when not competing with the rest... I'm sure anyone played saints row 3 or so should understand what happens when things come to blows even if that is extremely exaggerated example its not pretty but streets seemed a lot more peaceful for a while afterwards... till the syndicate ) ( sadly no solution is perfect.)
5763406 *reads over thou in depth comment, then immediately pulls thou into the tightest and inky hug thou hast ever been given.* We love this deeply thought out comment! Thou do understand the potential our doom has, but the question is how will he do so?
5764304 fuck with there profit houses with zecora Intel, then move and start tearing there defense and cash cows up to start a power vac, once gear is sufficient subdue/privately hire a few crims from outside sources to mess with people harmlessly and get powers away or wait till something tears up city and make move. make a bigger move on big crime boss and end him and forcibly take over or hit vital profits and make them attack maybe hit his casino/'s (power it off and tear off the vaults and wreck the slots or something) ... wait in visible place ( for them at least, given they'll have boys and informants all over to find you not going to be hard) and lure them public or area public will come, defeat leave them for police/power's maybe with some incriminating evidence they should have some on them... guns, drugs, phone with number of known criminal elements, ect cripple the organization and make a second move when times right or keep repeating till most of the city belongs to you and people start submitting.
that or play the dark night and mess with criminals while looting them and what they have ( bank robbery a few bills go missing or banks encouraged to hire doom guard 'security' with clause for immediate contract termination on criminal backed/owned banks!) (not publically offered obviously)( why depend on hero's that will put civilians ahead of you and your security when you can have a secret security response from doom guard, after all a earthquake or criminal attacks in nearby civilian area's and most police and the powers wont respond.) from there continue till your ready to make your own nation, and work at making contacts with people looking for a new start and to press the technological/ scientific boundaries. rather then make a move for a city make life harder till criminals agree to terms and if they mess up start breaking em ( they either agree to bar certain criminal actions as acceptable and pay or break and loot em till they break or someone who will does and accepts your terms and starts taking over there weakening controlled territory. Once you got one able to move on, another territory that'll play ball the rest will fall in line to agree so there not at risk from to fronts and risking being consumed or press to much in direct assault offering potential resources on there attacks failure and be consumed and give you a bigger profit margin in the end.) ( just be careful of double cross should you let one get to big an edge on all competition)
and done.
The slow pace is MADDENING but the quality SO makes up for it.
Really, someone should have taken the good toys away from the loser heroes LONG ago, since they've proven time and again they are BARELY capable of running without damaging or destroying a building!
It's like watching Gargamel and the Smurfs most of the time only worse, what with the "Good guys are gonna win because they're the good guys and the bad guys are gonna loose since they're the bad guys" mind set of the writers.
Also, ALL the yes for the for-shadowing of the Shield Carrier
It's the reason I like the Sith so much
freaking awesome job, the collective would like to suggest an oc if there is room, we would like to know of any particulars for it
5796466 We would suggest a private message be sent to us in any regards to actions of that nature. for both of surprise and spoiler free if accepted.
5796456 *shifts eyes.* We know not of what thou speaks of in the slightest. *shifts eyes twice as much*