"You worry too much that is why I'm the mayor and you're my accountant. * There should be a pause after the "much". Use ", and" or a period.* I can't shut this off. Please don't be annoyed. Neato. Equestria's newest assassin sounds awesome.
540948 yea I was gonna send you a pm and see if you wanted to pre-read for me on this one but I got a little antsy. Thanks for pointing that out. yea I saw the Absolution trailer and literally almost shit a brick and saw hitman had only be crossed over once so I couldn't help myself
This is quite enjoyable
"You worry too much that is why I'm the mayor and you're my accountant. * There should be a pause after the "much". Use ", and" or a period.* I can't shut this off. Please don't be annoyed.
Neato. Equestria's newest assassin sounds awesome.
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yea I was gonna send you a pm and see if you wanted to pre-read for me on this one but I got a little antsy. Thanks for pointing that out. yea I saw the Absolution trailer and literally almost shit a brick and saw hitman had only be crossed over once so I couldn't help myself
Hmm. Interesting. Keep up the writing.
Pretty good...I liked the story
Yes, another Hitman crossover! Tracked and waiting for more.
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Thanks I will. By the way your picture is awesome.
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Thanks the concept hit me like a ton of bricks while watching the absolution gameplay. Next chapter should be out by the end of the weekend.
Great story man. Write some more. I loved it.