• Member Since 8th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Jan 9th, 2018

MarcDaJohnson


Comments ( 17 )

This is quite enjoyable :moustache:

"You worry too much that is why I'm the mayor and you're my accountant. * There should be a pause after the "much". Use ", and" or a period.* I can't shut this off. Please don't be annoyed.
Neato. Equestria's newest assassin sounds awesome.

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yea I was gonna send you a pm and see if you wanted to pre-read for me on this one but I got a little antsy. Thanks for pointing that out. :derpytongue2: yea I saw the Absolution trailer and literally almost shit a brick and saw hitman had only be crossed over once so I couldn't help myself :pinkiehappy:

Hmm. Interesting. Keep up the writing.

Pretty good...I liked the story

Yes, another Hitman crossover! Tracked and waiting for more.

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Thanks I will. By the way your picture is awesome.

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Thanks the concept hit me like a ton of bricks while watching the absolution gameplay. Next chapter should be out by the end of the weekend.

"I CAME!"........ good for you?
nice chapter :pinkiehappy:

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Yea about that. When you import from google docs it drags the comments with it for some reason. :twilightblush: It shouldn't be showing up anymore. Any ways glad you liked it and ill have the next out as soon as I can.

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and hear i thought you just " liked " violence looking forward to the next chapter. :twilightblush:

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Actually that comment was from me. :twilightsheepish: I didn't realize it would drag it along when he brought it over from gdoc. And it wasn't about the violence, it was about the M4's description. I'm a sucker for guns.

I liked it. As usual, I am only looking forward for more.

Oh and one suggestion - please make these longer. Thanks.

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Yea next one will probly be between 3k-4k words. Ive got wrapped up playing mincraft now that they added it on xbox so it may be a little while before I can update. :twilightblush: Also I have to finish up my next chapter for The Road Home but ill get it to y'all in a timely manner, just hang in there.

Great story man. Write some more. I loved it.

817462 Thanks man, glad to hear you liked it. :pinkiehappy: Chapter 4 is in the works so it'll be here soon.

I really hope you continue this series. It's really good!

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