Hmm, interesting concept! Do I get it right that our human protagonist is German and speaks the language in the italics? About the other parts: I wonder how will this turn out, Sombra is, and always was, an interesting character for me. Keep going, I'm most curious!
My logic with the italics and foreign language have been, the person speaking can understand it, so putting it in something the reader can understand makes sense (At least for first person)
5492998 I like this train of thoughts. Since I'm not native to the English language, for I am Hungarian, I find this an especially well thought idea, I will use it in the future myself! Well, now as we have discussed this part of my interest, can you tell me about the future of the story? Namely, the time when you will upload the next chapter?
5493167 I hope you will find the time to continue, for some reason I have difficult times finding a good story with a dominant human on a pony, let the latter be anyone. Well, thank you for paying attention to me, have good writing times! Cheers!
Ah screw it, liking because I know it will be good.
Not a fan of M/M at all, but doesn't mean that gets a downvote.
One thing's for sure, it's fuckin interesting.
Sounds interesting, or perhaps I'm just tired. Will watch.
Hmm, interesting concept!
Do I get it right that our human protagonist is German and speaks the language in the italics?
About the other parts: I wonder how will this turn out, Sombra is, and always was, an interesting character for me.
Keep going, I'm most curious!
-Zeph
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You are correct sir.
My logic with the italics and foreign language have been, the person speaking can understand it, so putting it in something the reader can understand makes sense (At least for first person)
5492998
I like this train of thoughts. Since I'm not native to the English language, for I am Hungarian, I find this an especially well thought idea, I will use it in the future myself!
Well, now as we have discussed this part of my interest, can you tell me about the future of the story? Namely, the time when you will upload the next chapter?
5493131
Unsure, I've been focusing on a different story, but I'll do my best to keep this one amongst the 3 I work on.
5493167
I hope you will find the time to continue, for some reason I have difficult times finding a good story with a dominant human on a pony, let the latter be anyone. Well, thank you for paying attention to me, have good writing times!
Cheers!
-Zeph
Kinda disturbing, all this talk of murder and rape, but still interesting.
5507366
They're not good people, but they are still people.
Huh, I like this.. I see that much can be done from here
I hope there's soon an update c:
German... Butcher... Nazi!?
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Prussian, Barber, Gay