After a few thousands of years away, HE has finally returned to Equestria. Only to find out what has happened in his absence, some good, while the majority... Bad to worse.
If you're serious... this character is beyond unbelievable. Thousands of years old, and he talks like a foul-mouthed merc from 20th century Earth? No. All suspension of disbelief is lost. An ancient king does not talk like a grunt in an army.
5353735 Really? You expect him to drop the foul-mouth, just because he became king? It's still him under that crown, no matter what! And it's his call, his kingdom, his rights! Hell, it's his dimension now, you try and do what he does!
Are you serious, or is this a trollfic?
If you're serious... this character is beyond unbelievable. Thousands of years old, and he talks like a foul-mouthed merc from 20th century Earth? No. All suspension of disbelief is lost. An ancient king does not talk like a grunt in an army.
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Ok this story looks interesting. I hope to see more of this.
Insta like!
5353735 Really? You expect him to drop the foul-mouth, just because he became king? It's still him under that crown, no matter what! And it's his call, his kingdom, his rights! Hell, it's his dimension now, you try and do what he does!
5353983 Thank you! Though tell me: what is it you like?
5354230 One the story obviously and two because i refound Carolus Rex in the comments!
Ok. I immediately had to fave this story as soon as you put up the FLLLLOOOOOOORRRR!!!! In the story.
5359728 So you've pretty much figured out the song he played then?
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LET THE BODIES HIT THE FLOOR!!!!!!!!
Y-you dare to use swedens greatest king's name on a alicorn heresy!!!!
LONG LIVE THE KING! LONG THE LIVE CAROLUS REX