how is eaten a pig cannibalism or murder. i mean the rape and abuse yes thats bad, but the slaughter of farm animals is something the griffens would do. so are all griffens vegaterians or what?

Look griffins aren't even in the story, but that's a good point.

Since all the ponies even though they are anthro, are still vegetarians. So eating animals are practically cannibalism since they're animals too, sorta- look all I can say is that it gets to that point so hold up and give me time to work on the story and it will all come full circle

*hurls* *retches* ugh ugh *hurls*

5224871 I hope your hurling because of the pig gutting chapter and not the story itself.

Then again the dislikes stayed the same without adding another one. So, I guess you're just gagging to the pig slaughter.

5224976 *pauses from hurling* I'm gagging to everything that I just read! *continues hurling*

5224990 but are you enjoying the story so far?

Oh by the way saltines and 7up might help.

Here take some

*gives saltines and 7up*

5225014 it's really good for what it is so yeah I guess I am. I'm also still hurling on the inside.

5225085 I'm glad you enjoy it.

5225156 I guess you could call it enjoying it, I guess

5225188 I suppose so

5225199 I will have the last word! >:D

Errors here and there, but a good read nonetheless.

You really weren't kidding when you told me it was about to get fucked up... Why are you so goddamn talented at making people want to puke?!

5232170 but just think.

It gets worse

-Reading tittle and description- eh, sounds boring-reads the first two chapters- OMG THIS IS AWESOME PLEASE MORE I MUST KNOW WHAT ELSE IS HOING ON PLEASE!!!!!

5271007 so know you know to literally not judge a book by its cover.