come on more i need more things are just getting interesting i need to see how this turns out hahahaha amusing so amusing

but there is one thing that i was alittle disappointed about Marcus,s healing factor wasnt included that hole you put through him could have easily healed up in about a minute......but who the fuck cares i still found this to be very interesting i cant wait for the next chapter

5215801 I did run that in to consideration... But to make so chapter two did not consume all the action of the story. I made both characters healing factors slow down as the fight continued. The is why Shadows was completely healed from the first wound you inflicted the time it took to bat an eye. But he did not recover so quick the second time. Also not to correct you it is miner take. But the technique Bare Knuckle does not pierce. It makes contact and ruptures the inside of the target. Iron Reavor essentially is turning finger tips hard and sharper then the sharpest blade his bare hand can become and armor piercing weapon of its own. I came up with those two technique when I was planning the match between me and Marcus. But I did not want to release it in any of the spoilers.

I know you where not looking for a explanation but I felt I should explain why it turned out the way it did.

5215925 i enjoyed it either way dude and yeah i kind of understood why you did the thing with the healing when i was reading it and i must say it made it even more interesting

5215934 Note I did slow it down but I did not cut it out of the picture. That would be ripping an ability from you character. I don't do that... Just you wait and see this story is just warming up.

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OH THIS IS BRILLIANTLY DONE BROTHER! I hope to see more soon!

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5216029 Well just note this is no where even remotely near the end. I got a crap load of surprises in store for this one. So you are going to need to save your excitement believe me when you think you know the ending of this match I will blow your mind. Set back in joy the ride we are about to go on a journey... Lol...

5218946 personally I hope you remember my special abilities I showed you! Also I would really like to see the song the mirror knight's theme extended come on when it is me aka Lord Khaos vs who ever im fighting!

5219766 I will see what I can do... But like I said the story is no where near down we have not even reached the on quarter mark. All this just the prelude.

5219827 kayyyy.... Oh god I hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!

5219827 oh I have this story called midevil darkness would can I have you and jasphieer in it?

5220084 If you want...

5220160 Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!! *Snake like tongue hangs out of my mouth while its closed.*

5222935 I normally don't mind...

5223069 That's nice.. *I sit up and crack my back as I picked up my Dragon slayer spear.* Now if you don't mind i got things to do.

5223078 have fun...

5223110 noooo! yoou were suppose to say "What things you don't do things!" And I was suppose to say "Yes I do I take enthusiastic walks through the woods and you were suppose to say after that "And kill homicidal vampire priests?" and then I say "Very enthusiastic walks."

5223110 but you ruined it! Ugh!! What ever *Chuckles* I'm going to cause havoc and disorder! bye. *Teleports away and you hear a sound of a phone hanging up.

when you gonna make more chapter

5286927 Chapter three is a quarter of the way done I know what is going to happen. But I have yet to write it out. Too check out my teaser for the next two chapters. Check out the Blog post I.D.D.B. Update brought to you by announcer pinkie pie.