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Shadows Reborn


When you feel you lost the right path start from the beginning and try a different course.

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Oh god I hope I get some good parts when it is my turn to fight with honor and glory! And come in with a big enterence as all gasp in horror as Oblivion The Abyss Lord rerurns!!!

The battle with me in it is

Oblivion The abyss Lord
Eternal Shadows
Heartless Jay
Marcus the reaper lord
etc

VS

End the lord of fate!!!!! or something like that.. anyways brother good story so far!

5192736 Brother I am not sure if you know this but you are hinting for spoilers. I got this story all planned out it just takes time you will need to see. I just assure you that there has never been Bought like this in any of the I.D.D.B. matches before it.

5193215 oh sorry fuck i'm just exited that all!!!

I cannot wait for the next chapter and here is some music that I thought would go perfect with this

5197283 Not bad I am adding it to my list... I will see if I can fit it into a scene for the story...

come on more i need more things are just getting interesting:pinkiecrazy: i need to see how this turns out hahahaha amusing so amusing

but there is one thing that i was alittle disappointed about Marcus,s healing factor wasnt included that hole you put through him could have easily healed up in about a minute......but who the fuck cares i still found this to be very interesting:pinkiehappy: i cant wait for the next chapter

5215801 I did run that in to consideration... But to make so chapter two did not consume all the action of the story. I made both characters healing factors slow down as the fight continued. The is why Shadows was completely healed from the first wound you inflicted the time it took to bat an eye. But he did not recover so quick the second time. Also not to correct you it is miner take. But the technique Bare Knuckle does not pierce. It makes contact and ruptures the inside of the target. Iron Reavor essentially is turning finger tips hard and sharper then the sharpest blade his bare hand can become and armor piercing weapon of its own. I came up with those two technique when I was planning the match between me and Marcus. But I did not want to release it in any of the spoilers.

I know you where not looking for a explanation but I felt I should explain why it turned out the way it did.

5215925 i enjoyed it either way dude and yeah i kind of understood why you did the thing with the healing when i was reading it and i must say it made it even more interesting

5215934 Note I did slow it down but I did not cut it out of the picture. That would be ripping an ability from you character. I don't do that... Just you wait and see this story is just warming up.

OH THIS IS BRILLIANTLY DONE BROTHER! I hope to see more soon!

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5216029 Well just note this is no where even remotely near the end. I got a crap load of surprises in store for this one. So you are going to need to save your excitement believe me when you think you know the ending of this match I will blow your mind. Set back in joy the ride we are about to go on a journey... Lol...

5218946 personally I hope you remember my special abilities I showed you! Also I would really like to see the song the mirror knight's theme extended come on when it is me aka Lord Khaos vs who ever im fighting!

5219766 I will see what I can do... But like I said the story is no where near down we have not even reached the on quarter mark. All this just the prelude.

5219827 kayyyy.... Oh god I hope the next chapter comes out soon!!!

5219827 oh I have this story called midevil darkness would can I have you and jasphieer in it?

5220160 Yesssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!! *Snake like tongue hangs out of my mouth while its closed.*

5223069 That's nice.. *I sit up and crack my back as I picked up my Dragon slayer spear.* Now if you don't mind i got things to do.

5223110 noooo! yoou were suppose to say "What things you don't do things!" And I was suppose to say "Yes I do I take enthusiastic walks through the woods and you were suppose to say after that "And kill homicidal vampire priests?" and then I say "Very enthusiastic walks."

5223110 but you ruined it! Ugh!! What ever *Chuckles* I'm going to cause havoc and disorder! bye. *Teleports away and you hear a sound of a phone hanging up.

when you gonna make more chapter

5286927 Chapter three is a quarter of the way done I know what is going to happen. But I have yet to write it out. Too check out my teaser for the next two chapters. Check out the Blog post I.D.D.B. Update brought to you by announcer pinkie pie.

Damn then where is the real me?! What is this scorcery?! Omg the cliff hangers!!!!!

5341884 A writers tool tool keep the hype going...

5341907 where am i?! Who made that copy of me? What the hell man I hate it when you use cliff hangers!

5341912 I can't tell you that will be spoilers.

Hmm no it seems frostbite has disappeared without a trace, interesting, very interesting

5343439 Build suspense just wait and see what I got up my sleeve next. This is simply the warm up.

poor poor Marcus he's never gonna get to kill something at this rate lol good work shadows i cant wait to see what happens next

This makes me excited for when my character Geoden finally appears. I wonder when, hehe.

5375520 I know and I think you for the pacients.... I am taking a little break my editor is in the middle of another project. But I ask you keep your eyes open. You character will make an appearance that much I promise you.

5375634 It's fine, my editor is on break too. Dealing with finals or something.

5375942 Well Peewee started this big project because his GF's birthday is coming up soon. I told him that I will hold off on the stories to give him more time to complete it. After all who am I to put myself between the work he does for the one he loves. Don't have it in me to do that.

5375956 Indeed, although you and I have different views on that front. What needs to get done needs to get done. That is only my opinion though and obviously there are acceptions, like that which Peewee is currently working on. Huh, maybe I would be good in a business standard... No, I hate school work enough, a week of paperwork might just kill me, not my cup of tea. Anyway give Peewee my regards on whatever he is doing and tell him to watch out for me in the arena. Hehe.

When will the next chap come out and where did frost go

5463517 it is a still to be seen young one just wait trust me it will be worth it.

Whens the next chapter coming

5598644 Well I put this story on the back burner for a bit when some issues began to rise. Personal and un.. Then I just kind of moved onto other projects after those was sorted out. But not to worry I been planning on taking this back to the top of my list for a while now. So I will try and get another out real soon.

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