The Final Element
written by Hope24
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Why is this rated mature?!
5128169 There's going to be some pretty intense stuff later on. It'll be kind of slow at first, but when hell goes down, it's going to get pretty freaking dark.
5128169 Maybe because something is going to happen later on in the story to make it more mature
pretty good so far. And i like the harry potter reference
5128169 ...go figure...
Reminds me of FF6.
I read over your your story quite a while back and enjoyed it. And I understand the whole "revise earlier chapters" I'll be doing the same after discords reformation.
But if you want/can I'd love it if you went over my story and gave some suggestions, and tell me what you think.
PS: SKIP the "early chapters are too short or simplified" part. I know tha and that's going to be fixed after discords reformation. So yeah. If you can (or even want to, if not its cool) it would be really helpful, and great.