Dark Net, a Hacker and General Internet Lurker screws up and is forced to work for a secret vampire hunters organization. To make matters worse he's getting a new partner, and he really doesn't like it in the least.
Alright, chapter 2 has been posted. Also I went through chapter 1 and "mellowed" out Dark Net's personality a bit to where he was not so harsh. I hope every enjoys the improved version of Byte Nights more than the old one. Have a good night.
5126347 Yes, the downvotes are unfortunate. I had attempted to try a few things and go out of my comfort zone a bit in making Dark Net's personality type and story. In my reasoning I figured he was going to be just sarcastic and jaded. However, he did not turn out that way and he came across harsher than I intended(I do not role-play impolite people well even in video games as I just feel dirty doing so).
As a result, while the story did need some work, it somehow got placed in some rather unpleasant groups(that I cannot remove it from) which probably only served to escalate the issue(E.G. One of the groups was created to find the "Worst" story on FIMFiction.) So in turn it is just a lesson learned that I should really just stick to what I know. Either way I am glad that a few people enjoy the story and I will be finishing the final third chapter for it as soon as I am able. Until then I wish you all the best.
Have god damn consistency! If your going to use the stupid pony swear words, don't suddenly switch to asshole when the word "Plothole" was used about 4 paragraphs ago!
5145203 Hmm? Well it appears I must have missed that one. You really dislike pony swear words hahahaha. Also on a side note I am currently working on Chapter Three(final one) as I type this.
Update: Erm I used the word "dumbass" not "asshole". However, I will keep a closer eyes on my word usage to stay more consistent.
Just wanted to note that I am in the process of working on the final chapter of Byte Nights. Now being that I reeaaallly want to end this thing on a good note I am attempting to take my time in writing it(and editing it). As such I will try to get it out as soon as I can as opposed to giving an ETA(I am shooting for this weekend, but I make no promises unfortunately). Until then have a good weekend.
Just here to give an update. I am still working on the final third chapter. It is taking a bit long because it is most likely going to be well over five thousand words(probably closer to six thousand) and the editing process will delay it some too. I will try and get it out as soon as I can. Until then I will see you all later.
Alright, chapter 2 has been posted. Also I went through chapter 1 and "mellowed" out Dark Net's personality a bit to where he was not so harsh. I hope every enjoys the improved version of Byte Nights more than the old one. Have a good night.
It's a shame this story has so many downvotes, it's pretty good sans the clop which i just skimmed over. i look forward to more.
5126347 Yes, the downvotes are unfortunate. I had attempted to try a few things and go out of my comfort zone a bit in making Dark Net's personality type and story. In my reasoning I figured he was going to be just sarcastic and jaded. However, he did not turn out that way and he came across harsher than I intended(I do not role-play impolite people well even in video games as I just feel dirty doing so).
As a result, while the story did need some work, it somehow got placed in some rather unpleasant groups(that I cannot remove it from) which probably only served to escalate the issue(E.G. One of the groups was created to find the "Worst" story on FIMFiction.) So in turn it is just a lesson learned that I should really just stick to what I know. Either way I am glad that a few people enjoy the story and I will be finishing the final third chapter for it as soon as I am able. Until then I wish you all the best.
Have god damn consistency! If your going to use the stupid pony swear words, don't suddenly switch to asshole when the word "Plothole" was used about 4 paragraphs ago!
5145203 Hmm? Well it appears I must have missed that one. You really dislike pony swear words hahahaha. Also on a side note I am currently working on Chapter Three(final one) as I type this.
Update: Erm I used the word "dumbass" not "asshole". However, I will keep a closer eyes on my word usage to stay more consistent.
Hello All,
Just wanted to note that I am in the process of working on the final chapter of Byte Nights. Now being that I reeaaallly want to end this thing on a good note I am attempting to take my time in writing it(and editing it). As such I will try to get it out as soon as I can as opposed to giving an ETA(I am shooting for this weekend, but I make no promises unfortunately). Until then have a good weekend.
Just here to give an update. I am still working on the final third chapter. It is taking a bit long because it is most likely going to be well over five thousand words(probably closer to six thousand) and the editing process will delay it some too. I will try and get it out as soon as I can. Until then I will see you all later.