Nice.... I like this fic, in fact despite how short it is, this rivals "Fallout: Equestria" for my determination to keep reading untill I have to go back to the beginning.
5806610 Thank you! My only guess is that the line came from the combo of my intro and the full end lyrics to 'Pegasus Device': In the Rainbow Factory, where not a single soul gets through... Where failures meet the toll... Now I've awoken, and I'm taking back control. The words just spoke to me, in combo with rosy blood and all.
5806302 Thanks! This took a turn that I wasn't expecting, and I like it! Thanks for the comment~
Nice. I liked how you linked souls and spectra there. Very creative of you.
Nice.... I like this fic, in fact despite how short it is, this rivals "Fallout: Equestria" for my determination to keep reading untill I have to go back to the beginning.
5806610 Thank you! My only guess is that the line came from the combo of my intro and the full end lyrics to 'Pegasus Device': In the Rainbow Factory, where not a single soul gets through... Where failures meet the toll... Now I've awoken, and I'm taking back control. The words just spoke to me, in combo with rosy blood and all.
5806745 Wow! Thanks much, that's an awesome compliment!
5807893 your welcome, and I will say it again, THIS STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!
5806444 interesting~
I like where this is going!
Im going to have to reread RF now!
I was also listening to RF and Awoken. seemed fitting. Also saw that hint of lyrics in there!
6573786 I've actually been working on this one lately! Also, you can always see the lyrics in mine. :) I love using song lyrics!