• Published 21st Aug 2014
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Plowed Fields: A Big Mac Romance - Ron Jeremy Pony

Do you want that special somepony? Would you like to experience what it would be like to wake up next to the mare or stallion of your dreams? Well wish no longer. We here at Vogon Biotech have your answer. A fully created and real living, breath

Plowed Fields: A Big Mac Romance written by Ron Jeremy Pony
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Ellipsis
Ellipsis #1 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·
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Typo in the first sentence. "Shutter" should be "shudder" instead.

Ellipsis
Ellipsis #2 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·
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Also, "Finally giving in she reached out and touched the anthropomorphic stallion and everything around me changed from the email page to a multicolored psychedelic rainbow." You switch perspectives for a single pronoun mid-sentence. Should be "everything around her changed".

Boss_Hoss1
Boss_Hoss1 #5 · Aug 29th, 2014 · · ·
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Which story comes first? I imagine Tia would need the longest buildup to do right, so my vote is for Vinyl.

MTDragonslayer7
MTDragonslayer7 #6 · Sep 16th, 2014 · · ·
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You are getting Big Macintosh Apple, not a Big Macintoshi Apple, but the Big Macintosh Apple.

An extra i there.

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