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I'm loving this so far. Now to stare at my tracking box for next chapter
Nice job on your story so far, though I'm a little curious about something. There is a lot of grunting, why not put in something like when Octaivia closed her eyes, instead of her hear a grunt what about a gargled choking sound with the splooshy, squishy wet noises? Either why still enjoying and keep up the good work.
... I think she'd have been less traumatised if she was actually raped.
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