Out of the Sand

by Forward Unto Dawn

Prologue Part 2

Comments

[Lauralite]

Hm... Can't say that I'm disappointed with this development. I'm impressed as it has taken a solid step above your previous writings. I look forward to seeing where this goes. I also currently don't have the energy to argue my little nitpicks. That will come at a later time.

[ThatBatJess]

Good job.

[Forward Unto Dawn]

Thanks for your comments guys! It's be a while, and I forgot to put the story on hold. Well, even though that was a small chapter, I felt that I needed to get out a small portion of my new, more thoughtful writing process. Also, I was trying to get the story prepared for the third part of the prologue! The chapters after will be longer and more thought out, but won't be so long where people lose interest. Thanks again!

[Forward Unto Dawn]

5593956 YAAAAAAAAA BOOOOOOIIIIIII!

Thanks Clumsy I appreciate it!

[ThatBatJess]

5593956 I have those quite often. Often enough to make me sad, at least.

[MrMilitary101]

....again...

[Sharp77]

Where are the words for the first THREE CHAPTERS!?!?!