Dr. Whooves (who is a girl) has some blistering adventures in a magical world.
But... there wasn't any sex. The last chapter had, like, three sex scenes!
*throws tantrum*
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Ah! That's EXACTLY why I split it up - to titillate my readers by making them wait for the next update for the sex scene.
Is basic trick of soap opera and saturday morning cartoon people. Now you have no choice but to read the next chapter for the sex! He he he.
4837697 You monster.
So much Wat. I love it.
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Maybe entourage was used too much, I don't know. T'was a bit fast paced. Maybe in the future you could slow it down some? Add a bit more description? I don't know, just spewing out of my ass here. Take it or leave it.
But... there wasn't any sex. The last chapter had, like, three sex scenes!
*throws tantrum*
4837653
Ah! That's EXACTLY why I split it up - to titillate my readers by making them wait for the next update for the sex scene.
Is basic trick of soap opera and saturday morning cartoon people. Now you have no choice but to read the next chapter for the sex! He he he.
4837697 You monster.
So much Wat. I love it.
comstat.memecdn.com/images/comment/1518.gif
Maybe entourage was used too much, I don't know. T'was a bit fast paced. Maybe in the future you could slow it down some? Add a bit more description? I don't know, just spewing out of my ass here. Take it or leave it.