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You're missing a couple words here
You've repeated this phrase quickly in succession, and it sounds odd, like you used it in one paragraph, and went back later putting it in again, forgetting that you'd already used it once.
> to a very limited extend – speak
extent
> if this dead deathknigth and those ghosts were the only defenders
deathknight
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Fixed
...I wish I could get reliable proof readers - ones that don't just disappear on me after looking at the first chapter :(