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Heh... Yeah, I apologize for that, but for me it's hard to get "feels" out, not sure why.

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Thank you!

Here you go everypony.
Enjoy the madness that is Markiplier.

Whoa...I'm not sure which one scares me more right now, watching videos of Markiplier and PewDiePie playing Outlast, or reading this story. I will say this, you are doing one hell of a job keeping up with the exact events that happen in the game, and that's something many writers can't do. I really enjoyed reading this chapter and can't WAIT to read the next one!

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Wow... I was actually worried I didn't get the creepy factor down... Thank you so much!

I saw a pony's body dangling limply, when it screamed at me.

I'm pretty sure it was Miles screaming in the game. Just a small correction.

Wonderful, beautiful!
I can almost hear Markiplier screaming!
I think the pacing of chapters is the best one, if actually based on Mark's gameplay. The description of the scenes makes me remember both his videos and imagine the story with Dash too! And the appearance of the priest, heheh!
Fantastic, go on, go on!
When will we get the next chapter?

-Zeph

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Working on it!

Outlast + scp containment beach = best horror game ever.

4833468 I agree with you. You can just hear the screaming *faded screams* haha, oh we are really bucked up ponies.

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Whoa, all these likes just blew up in my face. Thanks for reminding me to get off my ass and write something, haha.

5078085 Your… welcome

Fascinating idea. Writing could use work, but what fanfiction doesn't have the little goof-up here and there?
Anyways, add the new Horror tag, mate. Get some horror fanatics reading this.
RIP.